|Reviews for Defection|
| riverrat chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
Interesting story. I guess your explanation how the locket ended up in Grimmauld Place and how Regulus ended up dead was pretty well thought out.
| LauralHilll chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
Very nice. Some bits I loved :
- Tom hating gays
- albus conjuring the Afghan
- "sometimes he left the stopper out"
| deleted2012 chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
regulus. snape, eh?
i never thought about that!
| slytherinbisquedoll chapter 1 . 11/26/2007
wow. that was really...tiwsted... severus was slightly massochist. but it was still a good fic. nice writing style.
| Cher A. and Brittany S chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
Oh dear! This makes a most excellent AU story! I really quite love it! Well-written, and nice vocab!
| mrs-isaacs chapter 1 . 10/22/2005
Well howdy howdy,
i was pleasently supprised by this one... I dont really stray to far away from but this was great! Congrats!
| Oldwickedsongs chapter 1 . 10/12/2005
I am writing because I don't think I ever responded to the review you sent for the Wake. Thank you and I am writing to say, I do think this is a great peice of work. You let us feel with the characters, especially Sev's desperation. The C2 I keep is for the various incarnations of Severus' as the Dark Lord's second, from pre-HBP, it's a great read I am keeping an eye on your work.
| starrrz chapter 1 . 9/6/2005
Just wanted to say I really enjoyed the fic, Snape/Regulus is one of my favourite pairings and I thought this was a very realistic depiction of the nature of their relationship.
Also the bit where Regulus dies is very chilling, poor thing! All in all, a really good fic. :)
| aymanimermaid chapter 1 . 8/24/2005
| sycoticatalyst chapter 1 . 8/15/2005
Am too tired to review right now, but since I don't another chance at it cause ffnet hates double reviews, you rock. And since I'm stupid, it might be a stretch for you to remember reviewing my GW/TR at an archive called 'Unforgivable', but you asked if you could archive there, and you can. Heh. There's a registration thing somewhere there, and you can upload it yourself as well. Anyhow, just noticed when I was doing some fixes on the site, so I hope to see you there soon. In case you forgot the link, it's toxic . sycotic . org (hope the entire address shows, otherwise email me)
Anyhow, love love love your fics, will try to properly review the others as this one is kinda a wasted one. Sadness.
| p0l chapter 1 . 8/4/2005
Quite interesting from Severus Snape's perspective. Very sympathetic
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/1/2005
I do so love this ficlet! Lady L is brilliant-BRILLIANT you hear!
The Regulus/Severus pairing, something I had never thought of until I read this story, is inspired and as I look at their similiar pasts as Death Eaters, Slytherins and Defectors to the side of light, it makes a twisted kind of sense. The kind of twisted sense that I ADORE!
Also, the way that this story is woven, it fufills the present Canon of Harry Potter, all the kooky stuff we learn in HBP, and yet shows a very plausible way that Regulus could have gone after the locket for Dumbledore and yet leave Dumbledore not getting the locket or even knowing where the artifact was placed. Wonderful!
| cronenus chapter 1 . 8/1/2005
hay just finshed have not got to the seers truth yet been caching up on storys after hbp came out, this one souns good and i wouldn't mimd reading more. the only thing i wonder about is if Sirus has the locket then why did Dumbuldore not know it had been swiched? _
| Silverfox1 chapter 1 . 7/30/2005
Shudder! ... Nicely done and fits the available evidence much better than the Severus/Lily theories, but probably still not what JKR has in mind. Nevertheless an excellent idea. I quite like it.
| Marina chapter 1 . 7/29/2005
Wow, I really enjoyed this chapter and I greatly liked your writing style. Is this a one shot or will there be more? I sure hope the latter!