Reviews for Breathe a Bulma and Vegeta Story
Unknown chapter 17 . 8/13
This was an amazing story probably one of the best I have every read️️️ Only thing I complain about is the spelling I had to guess on some words but other than that it was flawless
mile chapter 2 . 7/11
Awsome!
Irene chapter 17 . 6/12
This story is absolutely amazing. I love this story and Sweet Apple pie. Also where does Goku get all this money to pay for these celebrities at his parties. I mean does he have a job, does he get money from bulma, or do they just live off OX King. A really great story. I think you should do a sequel to this after the cell fight where Goku doesn't die and being the stupid person he is he wishes for everyone who died in the last year to be brought back to life which brings Yamcha and Jasmine back and they go and try to kill Trunks and they capture him and Goten when hes born to get back at Goku for when he was using Jasmines phone after Bulma was shoot at the 4th of July Event. Then the get them back but Yamcha and Jasmine survive and after the Buu saga trunks and goten get kidnapped again and ki inhibitors are out on the Z fighters and then Goten and Trunks escape and Vegeta is full of pride and love for his son and at the end when Bulla is born he says he comes a long way since he first came back to Earth after everyone got wished back from Namek and at the end the very first paragraph from the first story repeats itself at the very end.
iceprincessxoxo chapter 17 . 1/31
I love this story it has everything its amazing
Who knew that Yamcha was such a dick
Well I take that back everyone knows that anyway I love this thig it rocks
Thank you xxx
SaiyanPrince541 chapter 2 . 12/6/2014
This is the stupidest shit I've ever read... Gimme a freaking break... Yamcha is NOT a rapist and Vegeta is NOT Prince Charming...

B/V is the best couple there is IMO, but shit like this just ruins B/V fan-fics...
somecrazyfangirl chapter 5 . 11/14/2014
First of all, I want to Say I love your fanfic, but something hit me in the head on ch5... I read this story before, but in French! I don't know if you published it in French, but if you don't someone use this story as his.
Some crazy fan girl who want to be useful. ( again I love this fiction)
Sexy sayian chapter 10 . 10/23/2014
Damn I want Beyonce at my birthday, so can some bitch get her? Anyway not highlighting veggies character. So I don't give a shot wha happens. Bye
Leslie Alvarez chapter 13 . 9/1/2014
Love it I sounds so surprising and it is a great story I loved your work because it sounded so realistic and it would have been great in anime but even I love it
Guest chapter 10 . 7/3/2014
I love it but what the fAck is with goku so oc I mean he has a brain and money so tell me why why why is goku smart in any way he thinks marry is a food for gods sakes and hate no one if he does they have to kill someone or something to make him hate them also goku would die before not inviting yamcha I mean they are friend
Guest chapter 2 . 12/22/2013
Yayyyyyy I love this vegeta
Guest chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
U said tell how much we dislike? Ok.(: I found this dumb, stupid, and uacurate and lame. Haha nah it was like a 9/10 to me
Guest chapter 14 . 8/3/2013
Awesome
vegetalover34 chapter 2 . 4/20/2013
this is ro great but you should put yamcha hurted bulma and vegeta beat the hell out of vegeta
Guest chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
it was awesome hahaha yamchA really is an asshole hehehe #benette
Guest chapter 17 . 3/26/2013
I enjoys the story it was great,but love you can't spell
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