I enjoyed your story.

I read the ending just to know the reason and i dislike it even more now. It was well foreshadowed so i cant complain there, but really i hate this ending so much it pains me.

"That's why you didn't say anything; because you wanted me to look."

Thats the reason i s*** you not. I hate this so much.

Up to chapter 15 everything was fine, emotional, well written and few mistakes. But having a character that knows everything and does not tell harry is bad, if there was a reason for it then maybe i would have read beyond it but as you have not told the reason, the rest of the story becomes unreasonable. I get bad communication or witholding infomation for protection, but clearly this is not the case here. The entire thing about the horcrux hunt only works due to the obscurity of their locations, but lily obviously knows the Locations. This pretty much destroyed the whole premise of any action harry can and will do. And that does annoy me way to much to read futher.

The story was top tier, but my anger about stupid descisions forces me to drop it.

Hello
I liked it

Damn you for killing lily. I can’t finish this now. You messed up this story. Should have been James or remus.

Few flaws here and there but overall great work with a creative plot. Like the interesting portrayal of Peter here.

Do have to agree with Violet here, wars war. Stunning every Death Eater they see is useless in the long run, especially when those same people they show mercy to turn around to torture and kill them.

'she isn't real' how delusional is Harry? I am waiting for the point in the story where Harry accepts this premise, this fics idea has so much potential but even till chapter six the mc has not even processed that he is in a different world, i think this denial should have been over in chapter 2 or at most 3, after that we should have seen Harry at last enjoying a family and some real family interactions, these interactions which you have written where harry thinks they are illusions do not have any significance because harry thinks they are fake people, you are not exploring the idea of a harry who has been relieved from his burdens, you are just stuck like a stubborn shit stain on the idea that Harry can't grasp reality

you say that this story is character driven not action driven but even the characters are not progressing, harry's relationship with any of the character has not changed or improved, you have made it so vague that I don't know what harry thinks about the characters, are they still imposters to him ?or has he accepted that they are real or has he even accepted them as his family?, even though most of the chapter is Harry's rambling thoughts we still don't know these basic things.

I love the concept of this fic and your writing is also not bad, but the characters are so unrealistic in their behaviour,
First is Harry who can't grasp his situation even after 72 hours in this new reality, he still thinks these are imposters, what will be the purpose of such ruse? they are not even trying to get something from him, they are worried for him and he just ignores that and thinks they are polyjucide death eaters who are acting, stupid, also he is so weak and not good at trying to conceal his turmoil.
Second are all the family and close family friends they have known a version of harry since he was born and suddenly that version technically dies tbh and is replaced by an imposter in a sense and no one bloody notices, his mother who gave birth to him, his father, his sister who must have known him all her life they all just don't notice his obvious signs, even if they don't suspect an imposter can't they see his obviously weird behaviour, can't they all sit and have a serious and thorough chat as a family, how can they just ignore and just narrow their eyes and forgot when next scene arrives, also they are in a magical war where people can imporsonate others, shouldn't they be hyper aware about weird behaviour. it's just tedious to belive i am dropping this for now, maybe when I have more patience might give this a try.

harry still thinks these are imposters!? What the heck does he think Voldemort wants by making this happen, does harry think these are polyjuiced death eaters who are acting as james and lily and being all lovey dovey and violet is also a disguised death eater! does harry think so highly of himself that such elaborate plans will be made just to confuse him? it's not like they have attacked him or asked him anything of sensitive information of the war, what delusion is harry living in for 4 long chapters it's been 2 days right? he can't comprehend anything in 48 long hours!?

it has been 4 long chapters yet so little has happened and the most weird part is a lot of obviously weird signs are being ignored and harry is also very very slow in processing his situation, he has seen so much evidence yet he can't grasp the situation, I will politely say get on with the story don't drag so much

violet is 100% right- its a war and one needs to dirty their hands in order to save lifes. they either cling to their morals and pay in blood of inocents or they do what needs to be done, abandon their moral and get the results
between keeping people alive and keeping ones morals its not even a question what the priority is

violet was such an unlikable char- till the moment she cast a working crucio LETS GO!
harry should be embarased having to learn from his 15 year old sister how to do stuff

wtf lilys pregnant and neither harry nor violet debate it at all? they go for THE NEWSPAPER instead? in what world would kids not debate a 3d sibiling and rather read the news? thats super unrealistic