This is without a doubt the best Harry Potter fanfic I have come across so far on Well done! The pace of the story is perfect and I found myself lost in the story even though it's only chapter one (which is how chapter one is SUPPOSED to be but I find few people, including myself, manage to write a beginning chapter that makes people want to read the next chapters). I actually have a story of my own with a similar idea behind it - Neville is the "Boy Who Lived". Don't worry though, I'm not accusing you of plagiarism and you needn't accuse me (just check the publication date on mine). Both of our stories seem to have enough difference between them anyway that I think it shouldn't be a problem. I'm hooked onto your version though so don't be surprised if I review again when you've added chapters. :-)

oh my goodness, this story will be absolutely fantastic. i really enjoy your writing style and hope you update soon.

Continue quickly!

Very nice! Can't wait for the next chapter.

Also, how did Harry end up in the alternate universe? And, what about his old universe with Ron and Hermione?

good star, update soon

Cool. Do you plan on updating this nay time soon? Please do!

Hi, the story is going good, update sooner- Annon.

nice

great plot

keep it up its great!

Really really good story. Kind of funny too. I love that the chapter's long. Keep posting.

I love the whole idea of this story. Is the girl his sister? Please update soon.

very good. I was actually think ing of writing a story like this but i think i'll just read yours instead._

go on

Wow, very good, very intrigueing, very nice. Being a person that doesn't usually get hooked in by summaries, yours interested me and I quite like where the story is at the moment.

this is a really gud idea, so is the red haired girl his sister?