Wow. Great story. Really, it's been a long time since I've read something so well written and more importantly, so touching. Thank you for all the work you put into this.

Really liking the story globally but WOW this characterization of peter is certainly the best I've ever seen.

*sigh*

They really need to stop using weak ass spells Voldemort and his Merry Band of Death Munchers.

Poor Gina :(

Thank you.

That ending was such an emotional read. I have to admit it was not 100% clear exactly what happened but I'm sure I understand. Either way, the last chapter killed me. It was a great read altogether.

I really liked this story but I must admit: This ghost thing is just too wierd and doesn't really make sense to me. I like your writing style, but the plot just went very odd. I won't continue redaing this. If you had to kill of Lily, make sure she's properly dead. I did not like her be killed and woudl very much have prefered for her to live, but if you must kill her, that'd've been fine with me. It's just this ghost thingy makes it a diffuse I guess, if that makes any sense. Neither dead nor alive. And that's somehow wrong. Therefore, despite very nice writing and actually a pretty good plot, I won't continue reading your story

ok, I am confused ... Lily is dead, right? WHich, by the way, does not make me happy. I would have liked to have a family problem coming up then they find out that Harry isn#T THEIR Harry but I really did not want Lily to die. Yes, more melodramatic, I guess, still, I like 'good' endings. Not necessarily 'happy' endings, but in this case I would have very much preferred Lily to survive
And what is this ghost thingy now?

did you just kill off lily potter and the baby O.o ? Not sure I like that

I really like your fanfiction and I love Tonks so having her in this chapter was great :D

Amazing. Loved it.

Amazing. Usually when I read fanfic I reminisce about it being slightly better and sort of mold it to how I think it should be, but this story is well written, well thought out and brilliantly staged. You pulled me in with Violet's mischief, Harry's bravery, Ron's loyalty, and Hermione's kindness. These are Rowling's characters, but she would be proud of you. I am. (And if this sounds like a stuffy old man, I'm 14 lol)

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THIS IS HORRIBLE HOW COULD LILY JUST DIE WHY DID YOU PUT THAT IN THE BOOK SHE SHOULD HAVE LIVED AND YOU LET DRACO KILL HER!? WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU SHE WAS PREGNANT THIS IS CRUEL WHY THE HECK WOULD SHE SACRAFICE HERSELF FOR THAT TRAITOR I HATE THIS

Excellent story! Totally original, very well written, a fast, engaging read. Read it in one sitting - just couldn't put it down. Thanks for sharing it!

malfoy went to quickly plus WHERE'S LUNA!