I really enjoyed this story

Hello, your story is Amazing ! And i write you 'cause i want to translate your fiction into French.

in fact, in French, we don't have Many good stories so we Ask to english writters like you to accept a translation.

i don't want still your story, i 'll say it's not mine BUT yours.
i write your name and your profil

sorry for m'y english about away

bye !

What's the point of harry traveling when he is not powerful enough to beat voldmert lol pathetic story unnecessary drama and idiot of highest order harry in short disaster ff

I really love this. I feel so bad for Hermione, and usually I don't like when Harry has a sister in fanfic but I like Violet a lot. One thing though, I'm not sure if you're editing this still but the scene where Harry gets Hermione's attention by mentioning the attack on Diagon Alley, it should be "piqued" instead of "peaked."

ok, is it bad that I really ship drarry in this? idk, i never liked hinny so i skip over those parts, but i'm really liking the drarry even tho they've literally only interacted once lol. and ik it's never going to happen, but a fangirl can dream, right?(it's all we do lol)

This is honestly amazing and it really has the Harry Potter essence originally created by Rowling

Wow, this was an unexpected emotional rollercoaster at the end, but so very well done :)

Pretty nice first two chapters, but then you drop the standard "Dur, me no kill. Me good." idiocy, except combine it with an outright war.

Yeah, no thanks.

The whole "We need a saviour." bit starts to be nothing but patently ridiculous once you have your characters refuse to do anything even remotely meaningful to help themselves.

Thanks for a great read! This one hits the faves list.

ahhhhh! so touching! good ending! thanks for the story! still wonder about the fate Draco and Severus. hope they're okay! I love draco in here, this story make me want to read Dramione story. I hope Draco the one who save Hermione but Peter is okay too! I like Peter in here too. Good job!

at last he really become great guy. good for u Peter. sniff.. this story always make me cry

lol! minister always minister. canon or not. he is not good guy

This story make me think less evil to Peter. well, hope he got second chance to be better man

I know I pity Peter too but he deserve to die.

eh? are Lily still alive? are she ghost? or she like Harry from another dimension coz she said she died 2 times. I am confusing