|Reviews for the pome Noha made for Betty after she passed away|
| Amberhawktoo lazy to log in chapter 1 . 1/30/2006
Ok,here are some helpful *smirk* sugestions:
1)Go back to Second Grade,
2)try to learn how to spell,
3)and come back and revise this.
Okay?I'm not trying to be mean or anything,because let me tell you,I have een thibgs ALOT worse than this!Spelling and grammar error just annoy me *shudder*.And you might want to get a better title.
| Barry I. Grauman chapter 1 . 7/30/2005
For someone who claims they're not too good at "righting poems", you did DAMN WELL, 'atomic betty'! You wrote from the heart- and that's all that matters. You captured Noah's sadness and grief most poignantly...that's all I can say. Thank you!
| MikariStar chapter 1 . 7/29/2005
Aw Noah's chain mail sad but also sweet.