Reviews for Unforeseen
Ladynightwing58 chapter 6 . 6/20
The last straw was Harry's little "Ma". And now I'm crying. I hope your happy.
Charmandar chapter 7 . 6/8
found of him was a finger…"
no no no nO. PETER CAN'T LIVE. DON'T LET HIM, NEUROTICA!
Charmandar chapter 6 . 6/8
You're evil, Neurotica! ;-;
I'm bawling. How could you do this.
Charmandar chapter 5 . 6/8
...Pfft no, I did not just shed several years back there... Pffffft...
lilyluna43 chapter 18 . 5/23
Great story!
Well, there's another thing making your story unique: I haven't read any stories where Wormtail ends up with the Marauders again. Most authors aren't so forgiving. It's a beautiful tribute to friendship and forgivness. If you saw the review I made yesterday about Wormtail, you know how much I hate this character. Your story, however, gave a new insight about what could have been. Wormtail is neither a brave war hero, nor the last scum. There's an evolution of the characters' view of him. This is really good. Woumd you have told me 4 chapters before that it's gonna end this way, I would have laughed. But the way you wrote it; it seems totally believeable. No, the remaining Marauders didn't forget everything overnight, so this is still realistic.
lilyluna43 chapter 16 . 5/23
Ouf! I'm so relieved! You know, I read a lot of story where Harry went missing and I can say that very few have had this effect on me! In most of the ff, Harry is found badly injured or something like that. I like to read this stories because of the angst, suspense and finally some fluffy scenes. But most of the time they're written in Harry's POV. Maybe there are some scenes about people looing for him; but it would still be centered around Harry before, during and after te abduction. And this makes your story so special. In the last 16 chapters we followed the charachters around, mainly James. With all the drama, we built a connection to this version of James, which made the abduction even more stressfull. We know James, we know what he's been through and how he felt about it, and this made the whole abduction episode simply perfect because I felt soo scared and emmotionaly attached to James!
Great job!
lilyluna43 chapter 15 . 5/23
Just so you know, when I read that line from Kingsley about James being involved in Lily's murder, I sort of had a heart-attack and needed a minute to get my breathing under control!
Anyway, great story and I hope that things gonna lighten up a bit for James in the next chapter...
lilyluna43 chapter 8 . 5/23
NOOOO! That ****** rat! I was sure that he was still alive when you talked about a finger being the only body-part they found!
... Sorry, got I bit angry at THIS ***** TRAITOR!
Ups... *sheepish grin*
Honestly, Wormtail is on my top 2 most hated characters, after Umbridge.
Well, at least you didn't make the others believe that he died a hero.
lilyluna43 chapter 6 . 5/23
"Many of the witch's sobs increased at the innocent action" Not only witches! I was already crying but this "Ma" made me lose it! Merlin, I'm too emotional!
musa of melody chapter 18 . 5/15
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KillerRose17 chapter 6 . 2/8
Omg I am crying so badly. This story is so amazing!
lojosmom chapter 18 . 12/25/2015
Another great story. You have a great gift for writing.
Guest chapter 18 . 3/12/2015
I don't agree with Peter being forgiven, but good otherwise
Guest chapter 18 . 2/26/2015
Loved this, but couldn't help but think of all the things that could have been done with a dark-mark detecting ward...If the death eaters couldn't get past it, there would be soooo many ways to abuse that (think 'Diagon Alley ward, midday on a busy week, with apparition wards' or the ministry building). Place the surrounding ward, call a fiendfyre drill, then nab anyone who gets stuck. Easy.
MuggleCreator chapter 18 . 11/27/2014
Loved what you did with Peter. Similar to what is always thought...
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