Reviews for Urges
Hello World 2Day chapter 6 . 1/6/2007
ohmygawd! THAT WAS SO ROMANTIC AND ADORABLE AND HOTT AND FLUFFY AND ZESTY AND CUTE AND POWERFUL! I love the last part of this chapter! I'm gonna start crying tears of joy XDD Ichigo and Uryuu have THE BEST relationship everr! I'm jealous. *dreamy sigh* Great stuff! I give you a standing ovation!
Citadel chapter 6 . 12/31/2006
P-E-R-F-E-C-T

Though I must disagree with you when you say that Ichico is a little out of character, in my opinion this is the most IC Ichigo could be while in love. Don't sell yourself short! Yes there's fluff, but your Ichigo resents it, he scoffs at it, he feels ashamed by it and that is quintessential Ichigo. The emotional pain Ichigo feels (because it is in his character to be angsty) when he holds back the fact that he loves Ishida, is so very him. And that "I'm happy," line, well I don't think there's any other way for Ichigo to confess his love (you're right, he wouldn't just out and say it and Ishida probably wouldn't want to hear it, he has to believe it first). That was sheer genius on your part. It was beautiful and gentle...and still really hot!

Top Three Favorite Lines:

1. He’s wearing his cotton boxer briefs...painting his toenails a dark blue, roughly the same color as his eyes. (This line makes for such a delicious visual. BTW, thanks a lot, I never knew I had a guy-painted-toe-nail-fetish until now. Yet another thing that's going to freak my skinny guy out!)

2. I'm sure he wants this horrible, retched torture called making love over with. (...when I stop to think (over-analyze) about this line, it strikes me as being very bittersweet and poetic)

3. Quincy Death Glare No. 2, which is used to kill Shinigami instantly (Quincy Death Glare No. 1 is reserved for his father). (He has so many different types of glares, frowns, and glowers that it is so hard for me to choose my favorite, but Quincy Death Glare No. 2 ranks in the top five.

*And a special mention here for what I'm sure will be my all time favorite line of the entire fic, "I'm happy." That was so damn good, how could I not adore it?

Oh yeah, the arguement over the tea was great, setting the standard mood between these two. Isshin chapter you say? Please, please! I'm laughing already just thinking about it. Make him proud, make him obnoxious, make him embarrasing, make him Papa Isshin!
Citadel chapter 5 . 12/31/2006
Tee-hee! (stupid yaoi fangirl laugh) I was wrong, this isn't smexiness, this is smexianity. That's right, I just had to create a whole new world to describe your fic. SMEXIANITY- it's the incurable state of being constantly smexy. Normally, I prefer seme-Ichi and uke-Ishi, but variety is the spice of life and I'm glad Ichigo got that message, boy am I glad! And there was Renji and Byakuya too, like yummy icing on the cake! Everyone is so IC; which is really amazing, considering that you made Ichigo a realistic uke. And I've said it once and I'll say it again, Ishida is such a wonderful bitch, even when he tops. Gotta luv 'em!

Top Three Favorite Lines:

1. “’sup bitch?” Now I know that fucker Renji didn’t just call me a bitch for no reason. (Oh Renji, I'll always have a special place in my heart for him.)

2. “Can I touch it?” (HA HA HA!)

3. “Holy shit on a stick!” Well I couldn’t think of anything else to say. (Well obviously, Ichigo, but it is so funny and so you!)

Oh yeah, best bit, Ichigo totally being possessive and adoring of Ishida's cock is so cute (and hot). I like it when he calls it 'glorious'. :)
Citadel chapter 4 . 12/26/2006
Man, Keigo has issues, or at least he will have issues. It must have been a challenge writing someone so 'outside' the storyline, but I enjoy it when authors challenge themselves and might I add that you did spendidly, you kept it hot and witty while developing a little played character. And good for Urahara, he's willing to risk further humiliation just to see Ichi/Ishi action...and who wouldn't, I ask you? Certainly not me.

Top Three Favortie Lines:

1. Now the most recent encounter with the Ishigo (my new nickname for them) (It's such a yuppie pop culture reference and so very Keigo to say it)

2. Ishida is holding a stack of papers, probably alphabetizing them, that OCD bastard. (Yes, yes he is.)

3. I SWEAR ON MY GREAT-GRANDMOTHER’S DEAD CAT’S GRAVE THAT THAT IS THE FUCKING HUGEST DICK I HAVE EVER SEEN IN MY LIFE. (This line had to be picked. It's so out of nowhere, so weird, so funny that Keigo is literally scared stupid from the shock and surprise of seeing what we've been 'seeing' since chapter one.)

Renji in next chapter? I'm so there...
Citadel chapter 3 . 12/26/2006
Joy, another chapter in pissy-you-know-you-want-my-attitude Ishida POV! His snobbish rants, his casual inults, so very him. And the whole bit with the missing Ishi-cream, priceless! I kept thinking, 'this is gonna be good, this is gonna be good,' and it was! (Poor Keigo though, and Ichigo was such an ass to his friend, but then, that is Ichigo)

Top Three Favorite Lines:

1. There. I did my nerdy student deed of the day. (Because it wouldn't be Ishida if he didn't)

2. There he is being sweet and romantic again. (With Ichigo, we yaoi fan-girls will take what we can get)

3. “So that’s where that went.” (That needs no further explanation, it was just frickin' funny)

My mind is a blaze with all the wonderful potential for random acts of smexines in this fic. Must read on...
Citadel chapter 2 . 12/25/2006
I like the gangs different reactions too. Well, the second chapter is just like the first one...super hot, super smexy, which is even better than smut and sexy. You write both Ichigo and Ishida so wonderfully. Being inside Ishida's head is like being perpetually stuck inside the sing-song catchprase, 'I-know-something-you-don't-know.' He's just such a smug bitch! BTW, I adore how he's such an ass when he's pissy. All ukes should be ass-kicking, cockteasing bitches! And Ichigo as the over-sexed, over-possesive seme is so hot. Man, I already loved this couple, but thanks to you, I now worship this pairing!

Top Three Favorite Lines:

1. Never interrupt sex for anything, not even to sneeze. (I get such a strong visual of Little-Miss-Priss holding in a sneeze while Ichigo is going at it behind him. Total LOL!)

2. “No. Horny, now talk!” (All hail the over-sexed, over possesive seme!)

3. "All I want you to do is let me handle it, then you can have me any...(kiss)...way...(lick)...you...(nip)...want.” (*jaw drops open* Every time I read that line, it makes me shiver! All hail the ass-kicking, cockteasing, bitchy uke!)

PS I've heard that 'dying dolphin' moan firsthand, and let me tell you, it usually means I'm doing something very right.
Citadel chapter 1 . 12/25/2006
Merry Christmas! (Or Happy Holidays, whatever the case may be)

Let's see, what to say about your fic...I laughed, I cried, and became a better person on the inside. Okay, so maybe I didn't cry, but I did really love it! It's funny, it's sexy, it's oh-so-Bleach. And I'm glad I'm not the only one who noticed skinny guys are well endowed (well at least my skinny guy is).

Top Three Favorite Lines:

1. Oh well, fuck you, I watched gay porn all night and day. (Why do I actually see Ichigo doing this so clearly in my head?)

2. ...so he gives me an ultimatum. “Don’t you fucking stop, or I will kill you.” (Oh Ishida, funny and hot and so in character!)

3. Orihime squeals with delight (yaoi fan-girl)(Yeah, I admit it, I act just like Orihime when I read good yaoi)

Anyway, I'm probably going to have to review every chapter to your delicious fic in detail like it deserves, but right now I have to rejoin the Christmas festivities. My skinny guy gets weirded out when I read too much yaoi, he thinks it gives me strange ideas...and yeah, it does.
SyNth chapter 1 . 12/9/2006
XD OH! the ending! that was PERFECT! *cracks up laughing*
Angelline chapter 6 . 11/10/2006
Aw I LOVE this chapter! I love how it's proceeding into something more deeper and meaningful I hope you update soon, and you're doing a wonderful job Ja!
Momochuu chapter 6 . 11/5/2006
Their Happy, Yay!
Delmasca chapter 1 . 10/13/2006
Oh man! This is hott and halarious! Aside from everything making me fall out of my chair I though this was particulary funny, 'Orihime squeals with delight (yaoi fan-girl)'. Ahha! That's ME! Ahah! Woot! Go IchigoxIshida!
Yuuki Toshi chapter 5 . 8/3/2006
Woot! I LOVE this fic! i prefere Ishida as the uke though...anyways! i hope you update soon!

...o and Byakuya x Renji x Ishida x Ichigo sounds interesting :P

Yuuki
ile-o chapter 5 . 7/10/2006
man! I love this fanfic so mush! I don;t know why there aren't many IchixIShi fics out there ._.
VescaWithoutWings chapter 5 . 6/21/2006
Wahoo! Bring on teh friends!
Thoughts13 chapter 5 . 6/4/2006
that was hot, and sexy, and a bit funny. those were compliments
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