Reviews for Three Stars
moms2398 chapter 13 . 1/19/2007
Wonderful story! Very Angst-ridden.

Poor Daniel.

Now what?

MA
moms2398 chapter 12 . 1/19/2007
As the mother to a four year old:

"Potty dance"! BWAHAHAHAHAH!

MA
moms2398 chapter 11 . 1/19/2007
HOLY CRAP! My mind wavers from "Aw, Danny, Don't be so destructive!" to "Which hotels and can I reserve a room?" LOL!

MA
moms2398 chapter 10 . 1/19/2007
Had a slight problem with a tear on Teal'C's cheek. I can see him getting misty, but not actually allowing it to escape. Very Team moments here, wonderful!

MA
moms2398 chapter 9 . 1/19/2007
I thought this was funny: "After he had descended, the Air Force had handed him a year’s back pay – apparently they considered being ascended hazardous duty, because it was enough to pay for his house outright." But I, then, realized that it contradicted your original timing for the story. On Ch. 1 you said it was S5, Pre-"Summit". Danny Ascention S6. Still think it's funny, but...

I also LOVED "There was an archeologist-sized hole in his life"! Love, loved it! Like the squishy, kind-of-"I may need some Kleenex after this"-kind of love, loved it!

LOL! I know that last sentence made no sense, but I'm sure you got my meaning.
moms2398 chapter 8 . 1/19/2007
Yeah, like that quack will be any help...

MA
moms2398 chapter 7 . 1/19/2007
Gr! I want to reach through the page and strangle the b*& $!

I hope Jack shoots her!

MA
moms2398 chapter 6 . 1/19/2007
"No, I'll eat with my team mates later." You GO, Danny!

Wonderful!

MA
moms2398 chapter 4 . 1/19/2007
hm! What will Danny do?

MA
moms2398 chapter 3 . 1/19/2007
I love the exchange between Teal'C and Daniel...wonderful!

MA
moms2398 chapter 2 . 1/19/2007
I thought at this point that this was going to go "Indiana Jones"-esque, but didn't...way to keep me guessing...

MA
moms2398 chapter 1 . 1/19/2007
I love the descriptive language here: "She walked with an assurance of her sexuality, as women have walked since time began." Fantastic!

"She smelled like a cool breeze on a hot, humid day." WOW!

Absolutely wonderful imagery.

Next chapter!

MA
Miyth chapter 13 . 7/3/2006
I'm afraid that you REALLY should switch this to rated M for mature. T is not strong enough a rating for the events in this story.
devianttart chapter 13 . 5/8/2006
What a great ending! Thanks.
devianttart chapter 4 . 5/1/2006
This was on someone's favorites list so I decided to check it out. I like what I have read so far.

Thanks!
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