Reviews for Smouldering Black Eyes
PrincessChiChi99 chapter 1 . 5/7
I did really enjoy this. Short, sweet, and wonderful.
Astral Dragon Spirit chapter 1 . 1/12
Hahaha Goku knows that Trunks is on his way!
LVR4Trunks-n-Vegeta chapter 1 . 9/26/2014
Great story. Hopefully you will write some more for it. :)
xSapphirexRosesxFanx chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
Smart!
AudeTK chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
Short but very nice !
HaylesHayles chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
That was a very thoughtful wish she made.

Nice OS, not too short though, I'd say it was just the write amount of words for this little encounter!

Thank you for sharing.
SessRin4EverTID chapter 1 . 9/16/2011
... it started good but then i just needed to close my eye sorry i just couldn't see those word
dancer in thw night chapter 1 . 12/14/2008
beutiful i liked
sunlike chapter 1 . 2/23/2007
This is so beautiful!
Lecter chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
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Reiyuka chapter 1 . 2/4/2005
Hmm...this fanfic certainly makes way for a mixture of emotions. It's cute in a harsh way; just like Vegeta's love for Bulma, yet the passion that radiates from both is another thing to consider. Very nicely done.
dfgdfh chapter 1 . 12/11/2004
I reviewed this before but my account got deleted. Like i said i loved it, you are a very talented author and should continue writing.
maria chapter 1 . 4/10/2004
Wow. That fanfic was so...beautiful, sweet, romantic...wow. I loved it! And may I add that: Damn, your english is good!...WOW! sorry. i tend to repeat myself and be a pain in the butt. Really great fanfic, again. sorry. repeating myself again.;
Mrs. Trunks Briefs chapter 1 . 3/10/2004
very nice! thumbs up to u! Lots o' thumbs!
Anon chapter 1 . 3/9/2004
Title kinda reminded me of 'Because of his onyx eyes' by shigasu. Other than that, very good.
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