Brilliant!

Lovely

Excellently written. I think you truly captured Lily's ambiguous feelings in a very artful manner. Well done :)

-Zooey

cute.

Wonderful. Just - wonderful.

omg.

i love this story.

lily and james are so cute. ]]

i am sniffing. .

x

aw...so sweet. i really like the descriptions you have in your stories, it adds to the story alot.

that's agreat story. i love the way you write, its kind of old fashioned and its just so nice. :)

wow...you're an amazing writer!

this story is so full of lily's point of view and her thoughts on james, so it provides a one sided read. the story is good, and it prooves that you are a very talented author(ess!). the story is overall very well written.

in the fifth book, after harry sees Snape's Worst Memory, it says that when he went to visit sirius, remus says that lily started going out with james after he'd deflated his head a bit. is your story meant to be a kind of prequel before lily and james start dating?

i think the story is very good and really well writte.

and thanks for reviewing my story "True Colours", your criticism and compliments are well accepted! thanks for the advice. i'm starting on another fic, with not much OCs and i'll notify you when it's done.

thanks once again for your review!

That was totally, utterly briliant. Seriously.

i'm too lazy to sign in.. but i loved it! that was cute! i love it!

OH MY GOODNESS! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT! It's a beautiful story and it's beautifully written! Wow... *sigh* I want to have a boy that I feel about like that that feels that way for me too...

This is brilliant! You have an excellent writing style. You should definitely write some more. Cheers!

Damn. That was very, very well written. For such a short chapter (or story, if this was a one shot, which it seems)you captured everything magnificently. Your vocabulary is amazingly well choiced, as is your description of everything from rooms to James. You are an amazing author, if you ever write a book I'm reading it. Please tell me if you do.

-Althea