|Reviews for Confectionary Secret|
| TwilightStarss chapter 34 . 9/3/2011
This was my first Charlie and the Chocolate Factory fanfic..and I absolutely loved it! I loved your character Lauren; I believed she grew in character, which I love in a story. And of course I loved Willy Wonka! From what I remember from the movie, I thought you wrote him very much in character. Terrific job )
| shoeychocolatXD chapter 21 . 2/4/2011
i meant the flux capacter and hitting your head to come up with aa solution to a pesky invention :)
| shoeychocolatXD chapter 20 . 2/4/2011
nice back to the future refrence
| Goth Angel UK chapter 34 . 7/27/2009
""Oh boy, what a great idea!" he exclaimed, clapping his hands. His hat tilted at a dangerous angle and she reached up to straighten it. He caught her wrists and pulled her in for a chaste kiss, bringing the number of kisses he'd initiated up to an astounding total of seven!" - haha, that's one of my favourite lines, so Willy! Speaking of which, the way you kept him in character all the way throughout is amazing, well done you! Lovely story, the best of the Wonka stories I've read so far!
| Goth Angel UK chapter 27 . 7/27/2009
Hahahaha, the last part of this chapter cracked me up! Poor Willy, it must be such a shock for him! However, there's something very erotic about his complete ignorance - or am I just plain weird? :P
| Goth Angel UK chapter 24 . 7/27/2009
Oh, my, the end of that chapter was so sweet and tender! Btw, I do apologise about my comment in regards to Willy's eye colour, I see the mistake was deliberate :)
| Goth Angel UK chapter 10 . 7/27/2009
I've just come across your story and love it so far. There are a few typos which would normally irk me but the story's too interesting for me to get too pedantic :P I just wanted to make an important correction though - Wonka's eyes are not brown but violet. I really hope in the next chapters that's been fixed, I love the colour of his eyes and it doesn't feel right to read about them being brown.
| Chemistry chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
Ya know, I've read this story a dozen times, but I always end up coming back to it to enjoy it once more. I do the same thing with this one Harry Potter fic as well... I love you. :)
| Lahara chapter 34 . 9/15/2007
Glad you finished the story. Total awesomeness! I love how at the end you tied in the line from the end of the older movie. Very cute. Just one tiny typo/thingie. SNIKS stands for Stunningly Venomous Instant Knid Spray... the acronym for that should be SVIKS. Maybe use Noxious to get the N?
Anyway... brilliant story. That probably was the best way to.. ahem.. deflower Willy, as well as describe his experience. Heheh. Of course I'm probably just as devious as Lauren when it comes to libido fueled experiences with the object of my affections. Hope your next story is just as amazing.
| the ness-ness chapter 34 . 9/6/2007
I love this story to bits! *snuggles Willy, then backs away before Lauren clocks me*
| Tiera-Tarie chapter 34 . 8/31/2007
oh goody! congrats on completing this masterpiece. your Wonka was written to a T. i'm glad i read this, i really am.
| CandleInTheDarkness chapter 34 . 8/31/2007
Brava! Congratulations are in order, the best Wonka fic I have ever read. Thanks for the wonderful read.
| Yva J chapter 34 . 8/30/2007
That was a nice ending to a well done story.
Not much else to say besides that. I loved the use of the 'happily ever after' lines from the 71 version.
| mkyla chapter 34 . 8/30/2007
Aw, what a great ending!
| Tiera-Tarie chapter 33 . 6/20/2007
aw... i wish i had better words for this chapter.. tatally in character, Willy was, IMO, you seemd to have made that show scene effortlessly. and it was HAWT, i tell you. finally the tension is rewarded. you did a good job with the anticipation of the "pay-off" throughout.
Emma and James are having a baby? goody!
Willy may know where babies come from.. but does he know how to prevent them? Lauren could demonstrate better than some book.
i can't wait to read what's next!