Reviews for Not Exactly Valentines
StephanieAmy chapter 6 . 8/23
its sad that you have abandoned the fic 'cause the story is excellent and very creative
stillslightlyfrozen chapter 6 . 5/14
Pls write more. Pls
cassiewrites chapter 6 . 5/12
This is one of the best jily fanfics I've read in awhile! I doubt you're on this site anymore since it was originally published in 2005 but if there's any chance that you're still interested in writing, I'd love to hear more!
rosa chapter 1 . 5/2
at ftrst it was a little bit hard to read but with the time i really liked the stile
Someone chapter 6 . 2/20
Oh, and maybe you should do like this huge prank on Snape that the Marauders oh-so-CAREFULLY plan out (excluding "Mr. Moony", who doesn't like that kind of thing,) but then Lily catches them and redhanded and it just all goes kaphoeey.
Someone chapter 6 . 2/20
Nice Haha gonna read it again.

100 STARS OUT OF 50!
Betrayed chapter 6 . 12/31/2017
I've never seen a pinky swear - a PINKY swear! - go as brusquely disregarded and tossed aside as with this fanfiction. Nevertheless, at this point in my pathetic life, I am so accustomed to disappointment that I'll let your empty promises slide considering I got 6 chapters of hilarity and wit to enjoy whenever I need a laugh. Thanks, I guess.
StarlingChild4 chapter 6 . 12/27/2017
IT'S NOT DONE?! NOOOOOOOOO! But in all seriousness, this was such a clever fic and I know it's been forever, but I do hope you'll wrap it up someday. Even if it's one more chapter... pretty please? Either way, this was sheer quality entertainment and had all the great humor of the original books. Well done!
StarlingChild4 chapter 3 . 12/27/2017
James planning Harry's name in advance is beyond precious
StarlingChild4 chapter 1 . 12/27/2017
THIS IS THE FUNNIEST AND MOST AMAZING THING EVER! Totally gonna devour the rest of this asap, because this is by far the most clever HP fic I've ever had the pleasure to lay my eyes on. Well done, and this is only the start!
Wondergirl chapter 6 . 6/29/2017
I was laughing at this the entire time and I loved it! I need to see the next chapter! Keep writing!
Fred's fanatic chapter 6 . 5/9/2017
This was excellent yet as its only six chapters it was also
The final one which is a shame as I'm hooked on it
It's very exciting humorous fun filled although lily
Would have to tone down her words James didn't have
A mental illness unlike Her she acted like a goody
Goody two shoes whom never laughed or had any
Fun ever in two words exceedingly she ended
Up with James is a mystery still she grew a sense of
Humor I suppose turned every chapter
Into a thoroughly delightful witty storyline it's a shame
It has to end four more chapters would have been
Absolutely perfect?elizabeth skinner thank you
Fred's fanatic chapter 5 . 5/8/2017
Mcgonagall was right actually high jinks aren't that
Bad although Sirius aiming that bludger at his brother
Was absolutely thoroughly revolting regulus was still
His blood brother not James a grip on reality plus
Heavy detention for disgusting sportsmanship should
Have been handed down to sleaze bag Sirius some
Cold heartless brother he was far as I'm
Concernedsirius was nothing but a terrorising bully
Towards regulus whom was more courageous plus
Better looking than that loathsome useless brother
Namely Sirius you never treat family that way so
Regulus wasn't perfect but human whom died much
To young betraying still thinking its
Going to be number four as Remus and that other
Rat not Peter made those two bets I love Remus
He was more understanding and compassionate
Than the others a true written
Such terrific gutsy drama filled notes that have
Enchanted readers with awe inspiring detail great
Humor exceedingly witty remarks it just needs some
Mushy make out sessions that are very long so
Lily can finally realise James is the one thank you.
Elizabeth skinner
Fred's fanatic chapter 4 . 5/8/2017
Well she's mellowing slowly though her fighting spirit
Is still there which is marvellous and one of the many
Reasons James fell in love with her although Remus
Was the voice of reason but never a party pooper he
Truly was the greatest friend to James and Sirius the
Other sleaze that's a lot of food for a
Young witch yet it was a special occasion namely
Halloween so it doesn't matter except she's got a
Sore tummy my favourite would have to be the
Scrumptious chocolate cake with rich gooey chocolate
Icing and sprinkles plus your diary is your friend to tell
Everything to .youve written a truly remarkable love story yet it really needs some mushy make out sessions
Between James and lily just to get the ball rolling nothing to major yet planting the idea in Lily's brain
She needs something to keep her mind off the pranks
Being pulled a totally addictive love story with a twist
Thank you very skinner
Fred's fanatic chapter 3 . 5/8/2017
This is very interesting yet though hufflepuff witches
Probably wouldn't recognise an aphrodisiac in any
Perfume they're not that intelligent rather sad actually
Still unlike gryffindor witches I'd love to see just a
Minor case of jealousy from either of the as it would
Add some spice into their relationship right now and
It's almost Christmas so they could blame it on the
Eggnog or mulled wine at a Christmas
Why Lily's concerned over hufflepuff witches I'm not
Sure give it a rest they need to develop a sense of
Humorous as does lily life is meant to be fun not doom
And gloom ad nausea m James has the right idea for
A teenager plus the language isn't right it's too nasty
He's not. A death eater that was doing
Absolutely fantastic and thoroughly magnificently with
This awe inspiring story which is very humorous indeed
Totally skinner
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