|Reviews for Locked Inside The Facade|
| Guest chapter 8 . 5/26
This was really cool and I liked it. It also got me thinking. Even if he had gone to trial, because of the multiple batman's, he wouldn't have been found guilty. The prosecution would have no way of knowing which batman did what and so their case would fall apart easily. It was a good story.
| Reader chapter 8 . 7/2/2015
Absolutely excellent story! I loved how real and true to the DC world it was. I've been reading some of the Nightwing comics at the same time as this story and I kept getting them mixed up because your story is so in character! Seriously, you are better than some books I've read. My only suggestion is that you improve your ending a bit by making it more concrete, unless this is not the end of the story:) Otherwise very well done my friend!
| Guest chapter 8 . 7/2/2015
Absolutely excellent story! I loved the many plot twists, realism and conversations! I have been reading the 2nd n
| bigguy12 chapter 8 . 3/12/2014
Damn fine read.
| afi123 chapter 8 . 2/28/2014
This was amazing...just amazing. The characters, the sadistic Gotham perfectly shown...JUST WOW
| whereslucas32 chapter 8 . 1/7/2014
Just when I thought that I had read all of the great Batman fanfiction, I find this one. I absolutely love this. My only regret is that I didn't find it and read it sooner. I can't wait to go read the sequels!
| Graci Satchell chapter 8 . 5/22/2013
Will they be ok? I'm talking about everyone: Bruce, Tim, Barbara, Dick, James Gordon, the kid holding a balloon on Willowbend street. WILL THEY BE ALRIGHT?!
| LuoLiBei chapter 7 . 12/16/2012
A) I want to go somewhere with a bread bar! Hopefully without any shooting. B) Where's Dunning from? I don't think I've heard that story before.
I'm really enjoying your story. It took a little bit for me to get into it, it's not a fast read like a lot of fics, but I feel like it's an interesting story and you tell it well (even if I'm with Tim and want to belief Alfred will surely come back. It was a clone?). I know this story is kind of old so a lot happened in the comic that explains things or whatever since you were writing this, I'm curious about what the rumor was that started this all. :)
| bradp521 chapter 8 . 3/23/2012
I kept meaning to get to reading this, and I can see clearly now that I've been depriving myself. This is simply outstanding, and after I finish chastising myself for procrastinating so long on this one, I can guarantee I won't be making that mistake on the sequels!
| PJ Zatken chapter 8 . 1/13/2012
Ah, such a nice ending...
The giddy Dick/Babs fangirl in me is in hog-heaven for that last scene *sighs contentedly*
And the ending's screaming for a sequel...which I'm glad that it's all completed...lol..
Thank you very much for writing this gem!
| PJ Zatken chapter 7 . 1/13/2012
Oh wouldn't I pay good money to kill Hush myself...
Yeah, your Stirk was spooky. And I forgot to ask you something from last chapter - Barbara and Dinah exchanged looks, with Babs rather apologizing and Dinah responding "water under the bridge.." What was that about? Something that happened before in canon?
Story still going strong...and if I want someone dead right now, they're Hush and Akins...
Great job! Reading more...
| PJ Zatken chapter 6 . 1/13/2012
Is Stirk canon or OC? He's one scary dude.
Six chapters and the story's building up very well - and it's already at a high from the first chapter! I love how everyone's strengths are being highlighted in this fic, particularly this one - the detective skills, Dick's quick thinking in terms of doing puns, etc. The chemistry between the characters is so great that this feels as if this fic is really part of their canon adventures - something that I look for in a fic.
| PJ Zatken chapter 5 . 1/12/2012
Hush? You serious? As if it's not bad enough...
LOL *hugs* I'm sooo happy with Akins here. He'll be furious!
The pace is awesome here, as usual. I'm happy about Dick being the confident person that he should be here in this fic. It's awesome - job well done!
| PJ Zatken chapter 4 . 1/12/2012
OMG...Alfred died of WHAT?
And sooo having fun with Akin's being turned into a clueless chump...lol...
And on to the next wonderful chappie! Awesome!
| PJ Zatken chapter 3 . 1/12/2012
lol...Dick's off as Robin :)
Great chapter. Imagine my beaming pride when Dick one-upped Akins...lol... You don't know how much that's making me smirk as we speak...
Great third chappie. I cried over the Jim/Bruce moment. It was classic...