Great story, can't wait to read the rest

You've got Teyla to a 'T' and the bickering but loyal friendship of Rodney and Radak too.

Can't begin to say how much I have enjoyed this!

SATEdan i believe.

And collins... well couldnt have been that bad... like cutting well done meat.

collins was the guy who got fried in trinity for thosw that dont recall. same generator that blew up 5/6 of a solar system

This story was recommended to me in a review for one of my own, and I am loving it so far. It has to be the best story I have read so far, and it is worthy of being the first one to go on my 'Favourite Story' list. I can't wait to see how it ends. Thank you, Mr. Dredd, and Long Live Stargate!

Loved that. just brilliant.

Finally got back to reading this and it is brilliant. I would have paid t see that fight.

Hahaha I'm loving it so far. You've captured the characters so far really well. I loved the exploding toilet bit, and the x files reference. Look forward to more.

This made me laugh, I could just see this scene being on the cutting room floor because an episode was too long. Very creative.

That was really epic. XD

Great story! Loved it! Hope you continue it one day. :-)

Loved the little mention of the Steelers here... If only I had a penny for everytime I heard that phrase, especially during a topic changer, I would be one rich person. :-)

Enjoying the story so far

*snorts* This is one of the funniest ones so far - I loved number six by the way.

love it especially John's reaction

Bless teyla her alien nativity