Reviews for I Saw Him First
goldacharmed chapter 1 . 12/6/2012
Very cute! Everyone loves him! It's so sad!
KatzeNoel chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
I wish it would have happened this way. Tatsuki is so perfect for him, and he's so perfect for her. They fit each other like none of the others can. Ichigo may be the perfect match for Orihime and some of the others, but Tatsuki is the perfect match for him.
ChronicPasslind chapter 1 . 3/9/2012
Aw! That was so sad! I like how you gave what Tatsuki could feel about Ichigo. Even though, I don't really care for this couple, I really liked it.
ZeroXSEED chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
This is...Win, but...poor Orihime ;_;
andIJDC chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
hmm... well this was a very good one-shot but im not sure- I think that Tatsuki probably would have rather stabbed her own heart than Orihime's back- she just that kind of protective freind but thats just me i guess. Either way it's good and I totally love Tatsuki/Ichigo as a pairing
ShadowGOUF chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
nice one shot that was deep very good job.
Final Fight chapter 1 . 4/3/2008
Hmm... This is pretty well put together...
Oliviax3 chapter 1 . 5/2/2007
hm, this confused me a little bit cuz i thought this was orihime talking to rukia until she said she was so strong and stuff, but im just glad its tatsuki and not orihime...i wanted it to be ichiruki though..hehehhehe
Dark-Plague2863 chapter 1 . 12/30/2006
Very nice. Too bad there aren't more fics with this pairing.

-Da Plague
some random person chapter 1 . 6/29/2006
-loves- I loved this! I think it is kinda true on Tatsuki's part.
Dragon and Sword Master chapter 1 . 6/26/2006
Words can't even describe the feelings that I get from this marvelous one-shot! I agree with Tatsuki, she knew him for years. Yet I truly do feel sorry for Orihime, but as the old saying goes, "Love is war" and sadly she has lost Ichigo.
dopeypoo chapter 1 . 11/8/2005
woah... first of all, i thought it would be Orihime and Rukia but woah... good story
Rain Sky chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
There definitely isn't enough Ichigo/Tatsuki. They were actually the first couple that came to my head when I first saw Bleach. It was realistic, b/c Orihime DID like Ichigo in the beginning, and Tatsuki and Orihime are close friends. Please keep up the good work.
SuperSandra chapter 1 . 8/4/2005
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buzzz chapter 1 . 8/2/2005
Oh lordy, I LOVE this one :D

You write very well and seem to have a knack for conveying (sp?) emotion strongly and in a real sense.

Tatsuki/Ichigo pairings are always a possibility due to them having history, but they seem to be shunned for the more obvious pairings of Rukia/Ichigo or Orihime/Ichigo, which is probably a good thing, as it leaves room for good fics like yours to stand out among the crowd.

I would however suggest you leave this as a oneshot, unless you add another chapter for Orihime's responce/feelings, and possibly one for Rukia as well if you want to explore other pairings which havnt happened in your AU.

Anyway, Kudos on a good fic.
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