|Reviews for how long have Betty and Noah been frinds|
| Jess98 chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
There are so many spelling and grammar mistakes in your writing.
| tearsoftheskygal chapter 1 . 6/1/2007
cool story, at some poits its kina hard to understand!lolx!
| LoveRose chapter 1 . 3/20/2006
Finally there's a BettyNoah fiction! I like it, but it would be a little easier if you used quotation marks and paragraphs. Otherwise, I like it.
| JET92 chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
Good job but you have really bad grammer. It's Betty and I, not me and Betty. Idiot! And you used the wrong there. THEIR not THERE! And where did you learn you spelling? On bumper stickers! Sorry, but I'm kind of a perfectionist. You do know what perfectionist means, right? Or do big words confuse you?
| Barry I. Grauman chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
I appreciate your kind comments, 'atomicbetty'...and my last name is "GRAUMAN". I'm just happy you finally spelled Noah's name correctly!
At last-a simple vignette without any lumps or blood or angst! Just love and affection this time...the poem was straight from your heart, 'atomicbetty'...your spelling and sentence structure still needs a bit of work, but I still enjoyed it!
| MikariStar chapter 1 . 8/2/2005
I liked his one too it's full of cute BettyxNoah memories _