|Reviews for The Hunter Behind Bars|
| Eternal.Disaster chapter 5 . 1/3/2008
Love this story!
Can't wait to see Van Helsing and Carl's reaction.
| Dr.Lust chapter 5 . 10/11/2007
Oh my god! This story is UNIQUE! Now what will hapen next? I wanna know so badly!
| Kodi chapter 5 . 1/3/2007
OMG! I love it! Way to go! I can't wait to read more! I'd like to have a character in it if you don't mind. E-mail me on info!
| Asher Elric chapter 5 . 3/30/2006
This was so good! finally it comes out, but I would have waited a few chapters...oh well, your fic!
will be watching.
| Asher Elric chapter 4 . 3/30/2006
Oh shit! oh shit! oh shit! oh shit! oh shit! oh shit!
Dyra is...damn! but what a great plot twist! honestly, its brilliant! Gabrile doesn't remember a thing!
Damn! damn! damn! damn!
sorry, I don't usually curse so much in a review.
However, I want you to know that I liked this chapter!
| Asher Elric chapter 3 . 3/30/2006
Ah, the Cardinel is one sly cookie! hehehehe, I think this is brilliant!
Well, I hope this review makes up for my last one, sorry about that. Thought I aught to explain!
| Asher Elric chapter 2 . 3/30/2006
Hi! I liked this chapter!
Not to be rude or anything. But putting an A/N in the middle of the chapter makes the flowing of said chapter very weird.
I understand why you wanted to explain yourself, don't get me wrong. And I think that 'Mr.' was used in the movie...I just watched it last night but I only wanted to see the end 'cause its my fav part!
So, maybe in the future...you could put A/N's in the beginning or end of chapters. If there is something that happens near the end of the chapter. Better put it in an A/N at the bottom of chapter. Like you do with this one.
I'm sorry, it's a pet peve of some readers. I do like this chapter though. You are very good at this mistery thing!
| Asher Elric chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
Damn! and here I thought he would get away! Oh well, on to the next chapter. I'm always up for a good VH fic!
| silver-wolfess chapter 1 . 3/11/2006
I feal the way you portrayed Van Helsing's character was interesting. but there was one thing that bugged me to no end wile I was reading this. If Van helsing is still truely cursed by the lycan then the bulets to his sholder would not have effected him in the way they did unless they where solid silver, even with the drug carl gave him (( more or less likely))I might read more of this story if I find the time.
| Fortune Zyne chapter 5 . 3/2/2006
Dyra ius pathetic if you ask me.
| Blue Autumn Sky chapter 4 . 2/15/2006
*blink* *blink* Ok, so the chick that threw Van Helsing behind bars is his DAUGHTER? Ok, this OC is getting to be too...Mary Sueish. Beautiful, powerful, haunted by her past, dangerous, vengeful, daughter or the main character.
But on the plus, we get to see Van Helsing in his werewolf form.
| Fortune Zyne chapter 4 . 2/15/2006
It's a pity she thinks that way.
| Blue Autumn Sky chapter 3 . 12/17/2005
You liked my idea? Cool. I can't wait to see what happens now.
It's going to be very interesting to see how this works out; Van Helsing is due to become a bloodthirsty beast in just a few days, probably just in time for the trial or more likely the execution. Carl is going with the intent to help, but he's "not a field man" as he said so himself. And then the woman still thinks Van Helsing a murderer.
| Fortune Zyne chapter 3 . 11/27/2005
| Blue Autumn Sky chapter 2 . 10/17/2005
This is a good story. I definitly like. I can't wait to see what happens. I love these stories where Van Helsing is still a werewolf. That voice in his head? Was he talking to himself, or was the werewolf talking to him? That would be cool, Van Helsing talking to his werewolf side and vice versa.
And while I'm not Catholic, I'm sure it's the Pope, not the Monk.