|Reviews for Crossing the Line|
| Lia Silverclaw chapter 3 . 2/10
You know, it really is a shame this story was never finished. One more chapter could take care of everything and you've got 219 people waiting for this story to be finished, 220 if you include me. I hope you find the inspiration to finish this story some day and look forward to finally finding out how this ends. Preferably with a half-dead or very dead Matthew Riverston.
| scorchedtrees chapter 3 . 6/10/2013
Is it wrong that I like Matthew in this story a lot? All his reactions (ie. to Chrono being a demon) just crack me up. Anyway, this is pretty interesting so far, and I'm looking forward to seeing where you take it if you continue someday.
| xxcandylover23xx chapter 3 . 5/19/2013
plz update so soon!
| xxcandylover23xx chapter 1 . 5/19/2013
daaammmnnnn! Good freaking chapter, good job.
| ILoveFanfiction-AnimeAdik chapter 3 . 3/18/2013
Oh my god! Oh my god! Please update! Update! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!UPDATE! As in YOU REALLY NEED TO UPDATE THIS STORY! What happened to matthew? That damn stupid bitch! Argh! Please let Chrono tortured that dumbass pervert fucking shit! I hate him! Put him in the pit of never ending hell. And he already crossed the line by forcing rosette to do something. He better die. Please UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE! Thats all. Now you dear author get on your ass and start working on the next chapter or i wont give you COOKIES! XD x)) really please update! The story is just so awesome! Even if it only contain 3 chapters though every chapter is long. Please update! And also your other story is awesome! :)
| Jagged Sunshine chapter 3 . 2/10/2013
Umm, is this still being updated? I REALLY NEED to know what happens next *squeal*
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 3 . 8/20/2012
Yaay so Chrono now has an adult form. I still like the child form, because he looks so cute as a kid. I do agree that even thought Rosette accepts him for who he is, but well in child form it's hard to not treat him like a kid and he also acts less serious in that form... reminds me of a scene from Mahou sensei negima. Where one of Negi's students commented that the form someone takes affects their personality. That also applies to Chrono.
So if Rosette and Chrono weren't interrupted, they could have gone even further. XD But it's hard to be intimate when you'er staying in a building with multiple rooms. i am sure Rosette must have been so embarrassed.
I really can't wait for the next chapter when Chrono will kick that Riverston idiot's ass. (If I spelled his name wrong all the time, well that's because he isn't worth to remember XD. He can scare the crap out of him. For trying to commit rape. I am even surprised that Rosette never gave complains to sister Kate about him. He's obviously a molester. Anyway keep up the good work :D
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 2 . 8/20/2012
Even if that Riverston guy would give a million apologies, I still wouldn't forgive him. he doesn't know how to respect women and well a rose is no way to buy them. First impressions are the most important and Rosette shouldn't be fooled with such an idiot!
I just can't believe Chrono went into the woman's bathroom. Such a little perv and poor Rosette can;t scream of else the others know she's been taking a bath secretly very late. I laughed at the part were Rosette thought that sister Kate caught her and she was begging to not take her drivers licence. I wonder what Chrono had been thinking at that time maybe something like. Typical of her.
That idiot should realize that he should leave Rosette alone. Can't his brain comprehend that a no is a no. Chrono you should have killed him... no even I think that's too far. Where the hell does that Riverston guy thinks Rosette has been manipulated by Chrono. He;s been too much of a kindhearted person. Besides Rosette is the one who's been pushing the poor guy around like a slave XD. Chrono carries Rosette's stuff, he also does her laundry, he sews and I am sure that if Rosette was ever told to cook she'll let Chrono do the cooking for her.
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
I like this story. Chrono's personality is well I like it also. It's funny to see him jealous and I already hate that Riverson guy. I hope Rosette will stay away from him. I am glad Chrono was the one who stole her first kiss. Even thought it was an innocent one. That's cute in my opinion.
| Heir of Rage chapter 3 . 10/18/2011
soooo...leaving horrible cliffies for 6 years, eh?
...i'm gonna go cry, now...
| kirr1001 chapter 3 . 5/11/2011
Too bad you don't write this anymore...I'd have liked to see what happens next ( anyway, very good story
| ShapeshifterDemon65 chapter 3 . 4/29/2011
Please update this story :(
You can't just leave with a cliffhanger. Chrono needs to murder Matthew slowly and painfully _ *evil look*
| Serena Scarlet chapter 3 . 3/29/2011
OMG! Chrono is just so damn sexy and dominating...PLEASE WRITE MORE! AGH!
| FadingNoctis chapter 3 . 2/27/2011
Amazing! I can wait to see Chrno to kiss some ass! XD
Hope to read the next chapter soon. ;)
Amazing. Keep up the good work.
| noodlez911 chapter 3 . 1/31/2011
omg update please! but i don't think that's gonna happen since you haven't updated for 5 years for this story :[