Reviews for Crossing the Line
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 2 . 8/20/2012
Even if that Riverston guy would give a million apologies, I still wouldn't forgive him. he doesn't know how to respect women and well a rose is no way to buy them. First impressions are the most important and Rosette shouldn't be fooled with such an idiot!

I just can't believe Chrono went into the woman's bathroom. Such a little perv and poor Rosette can;t scream of else the others know she's been taking a bath secretly very late. I laughed at the part were Rosette thought that sister Kate caught her and she was begging to not take her drivers licence. I wonder what Chrono had been thinking at that time maybe something like. Typical of her.

That idiot should realize that he should leave Rosette alone. Can't his brain comprehend that a no is a no. Chrono you should have killed him... no even I think that's too far. Where the hell does that Riverston guy thinks Rosette has been manipulated by Chrono. He;s been too much of a kindhearted person. Besides Rosette is the one who's been pushing the poor guy around like a slave XD. Chrono carries Rosette's stuff, he also does her laundry, he sews and I am sure that if Rosette was ever told to cook she'll let Chrono do the cooking for her.
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
I like this story. Chrono's personality is well I like it also. It's funny to see him jealous and I already hate that Riverson guy. I hope Rosette will stay away from him. I am glad Chrono was the one who stole her first kiss. Even thought it was an innocent one. That's cute in my opinion.
heir.of.rage chapter 3 . 10/18/2011
soooo...leaving horrible cliffies for 6 years, eh?

...i'm gonna go cry, now...
kirr1001 chapter 3 . 5/11/2011
Too bad you don't write this anymore...I'd have liked to see what happens next ( anyway, very good story
ShapeshifterDemon65 chapter 3 . 4/29/2011
Please update this story :(

You can't just leave with a cliffhanger. Chrono needs to murder Matthew slowly and painfully _ *evil look*
Serena Scarlet chapter 3 . 3/29/2011
OMG! Chrono is just so damn sexy and dominating...PLEASE WRITE MORE! AGH!
FadingNoctis chapter 3 . 2/27/2011
Amazing! I can wait to see Chrno to kiss some ass! XD

Hope to read the next chapter soon. ;)

Amazing. Keep up the good work.
noodlez911 chapter 3 . 1/31/2011
omg update please! but i don't think that's gonna happen since you haven't updated for 5 years for this story :[
nekoneko423 chapter 3 . 1/14/2011
oh plzzz continue this story!u r an amazing writer for fanfics and this is one that needs to be continued, and besides i bet u will get more ppl to like ur stories and fav u if u continued and made a even better ending!o and i also luv ur princess tutu fiction, as well!~
Elly3981 chapter 3 . 11/16/2010
I remember reading this a while back. I really liked it, very sexy and suspensful. Chrono seems a bit possessive but I supposed it shouldn't be a surprise as he does love Rosette very much. I do hope you finish it eventually; I really hate it when a writer starts a great story and never finishes! :)
SierraKeeganM chapter 3 . 11/6/2010
omg you have to get th next chapter up soon PLZ!
Allycat2090 chapter 3 . 7/3/2010
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH! HOW COULD YOU END IT RIGHT AT THE GOOD PART? Things were just getting steamy between Chrono and Rosette and you had to go and stop them? Meanie! I demand an update!...Please?
Racing Husky chapter 3 . 6/24/2010
at the moment... I LOVE THIS FIC! i know its been 5 years but can you pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease update soon! i think alot of people will love you for it
jax2468 chapter 3 . 6/24/2010
i know you havent updated this story in almost 5 years but...PLEASE UPDATE! this is so good! and i cant accept the fact that it will never be complete! please (begs and will probrbaly do anything for you to update...well maybe not anything) but you get what im saying!
snake and crane chapter 3 . 6/22/2010
oh dear it seams chrno is a little pissed of (kick that creeps but!) and a bit possesive (just a tiny little bit )that mthiew creep will get what he deseves mwhhahaha what did he do in florida ?
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