|Reviews for Crossing the Line|
| jax2468 chapter 3 . 6/24/2010
i know you havent updated this story in almost 5 years but...PLEASE UPDATE! this is so good! and i cant accept the fact that it will never be complete! please (begs and will probrbaly do anything for you to update...well maybe not anything) but you get what im saying!
| snake and crane chapter 3 . 6/22/2010
oh dear it seams chrno is a little pissed of (kick that creeps but!) and a bit possesive (just a tiny little bit )that mthiew creep will get what he deseves mwhhahaha what did he do in florida ?
| lacrima-tuja chapter 3 . 6/7/2010
no update to this wonderful story in close to five years? impossible..*snif*
best regards from germany,
| TecknaTeckna chapter 2 . 5/17/2010
Please update soon i really do love this fanfic so far :)
| Jessica chapter 3 . 5/7/2010
oh my god you are a awsome writer please keep up the good work. I'll be showing my friend this she loves storys like this as much as i do.
Also i think every girl is rooting for chrono like one of my friends said hes one sexy devil.
| ShapeshifterDemon65 chapter 1 . 3/9/2010
This is one of the best Chrono Crusade fics on this site. You're doing a great job showing a dark and possessive Chrono. He's sexy and much more like a demon should be ;) Judging by the amount of reviews you have, it seems like alot of people agree. I really wish you wouldn't give up on this story and let us know how it ends. Your doing a really wonderful job.
| Wordlurker chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
A bit OOC, perhaps, but Chrno is really possessive of Rosette... I personally think he wouldn't handle a guy moving in on Rosette very well, romantic feelings or not. She's *his*, after all... _
'Sides, Jealous!Chrno is funny. Almost as much as Drunk!Chrno and SugarRush!Chrno.
| Aqua Child chapter 3 . 11/8/2009
It looks like you've abandoned this story, but I just wanted to tell you that I love it. I love assertive Chrno, it's very hot. I loved this so much that tomorrow I'm going to be checking out your other stories, but for now, it's bedtime. I hope you do eventually pick this up again, it's a good story.
| beautifly92 chapter 3 . 9/12/2009
OH... I've just read your profile...
Too bad such a good story like this one is on hiatus...
ANyway, I hope you can update this fanfic soon.
| Chikanpo chapter 3 . 8/11/2009
Okay, I know it's been a really long time since you're last update and that you're probably not gonna continue this... But it is an AWESOME story! I absolutly LOVE dark Chrno :D He is awesome! Die Florida brunette! If you did decide to continue this, I'm sure many people would be happy considering the amount of reviews it has. It is probably the best Chrno Crusade fic (that I've read so far anyway) ever! I'm hoping that you do eventually decide to continue it. I absolutly LOVE it!
| The Jester Girl chapter 3 . 4/23/2009
Thank you for you wonderful fanfiction. Its refreshing, to read a good fanfiction. Even more enjoyable, to read on that isn't written like the author is on crack.
Thank you once again for taking the time to write this, and thank you for posting it here for all to read. By far the best Chrno Rosette fanfiction, I have read, and that is out there.
| shadowneko003 chapter 3 . 3/31/2009
just letting you know that this is a great story so far
| Tainted Ink And Paper chapter 3 . 3/29/2009
Whoa... just whoa... holy cow! Chrono is so sexy in this fanfiction! I love what you did with him! Playing with the possiblity of jealousy is great Your words make the story flow nicely and it gives it the extra flair it needs to string an audience along! Keep it up _
| Angel Fantasy chapter 3 . 3/29/2009
The Elder, furous: You teach him a good lesson, my boy!
Satella, waving an angry fist: castrate him!
Rosette, roaring: KICK HIS ASS TO HELL, CHRNO! MAKE HIM PAY!
A livid Remington is holding a fainted Sister Kate.
I so want to strangle Matthew...! DON'T LET HIM GET AWAY, CHRNO!
Update, please! I wanna know how Chrno is going to kill Matthew... *growls at the raper*
| Angel Fantasy chapter 2 . 3/27/2009
*hisses* Just let me strangle him...! *glares at Matthew with all her worth* You *beep* bastard! YOU STAY AWAY FROM ROSETTE!
*coughcough* ahem... Sorry, I got carried away with my anger.
That story is so good! I especially like the lime scene. *drools* I hope there'll be more of it in the next chapter. And those to come.