|Reviews for Miss Teen Jump City Beauty Pageant|
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/8/2014
Write more ps I hate terra with all my heart how dare she break bb my favorite titans heart so I hate her now for my words to happy sun I hate terra mutates into dragon that would make trigon cry pee his loin cloth and shit himself having a stroke seizure and heart attack all at the same time :and you hate terra too if not FEEL MY WRATH!
| wishyouweremedontya chapter 6 . 11/6/2013
Your history is marvelous. Can you pleas try to continue it? Also i wonder what will happen in the next chapter... See ya!
| RedxRae chapter 6 . 11/3/2013
| BartWLewis chapter 6 . 9/14/2013
Alright I dig the story. Its gotta cool plot and the comment made by Beast Boy to Raven about how she had nice legs and would look pretty in a dress... were priceless. Hope you update soon.
| Echolove chapter 6 . 8/31/2013
Update, I BEG OF YOU, UPDATE, PLEASE! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEEEEEEEASE UPDATE! *whew I typed please 50 times, Echo now has sore fingers* Just please update soon?!
| Echolove chapter 5 . 8/31/2013
YES! MAKE CYBORG DO 500 PUSH UPS!
The worst titan is:...MAS Y MENOS, CUZ I CAN'T UNDERSTAND SPANISH!
The worst villian is:...ADONIS, CUZ HE IS A STUPID WANNABE JERK WITH NO LIFE WHO EXISTS FOR SOME UNKNOWN REASON THAT I CAN'T EVEN POSSIBLY FATHOM WHY THE SHOW EVEV CREATED HIM IN THE FIRST PLACE, AND IF HE IS IN SEASON SIX, I WILL THROW SOMETHING AT THE TV. *deep breaths Echo, deep breaths* OH, AND ADONIS IS NOT EVEN A REAL VILLIAN, JUST SOME STUPID GUY IN LONG UNDERWEAR WEARING A PIECE OF METAL THAT HE THINKS MAKES HIM COOL AND, GIVES HIM SUPERPOWERS THAT ARE NONEXISTANT, AND EXIST ONLY IN HIS TINY EGO MANIAC LITTLE BRAIN. HE EVEN HAD THE NERVE TO HURT RAVEN! THE NERVE! ADONIS IS A JERK, AND HE SHOULD NEVER HAVE BEEN IN THE SHOW IN THE FIRST PLACE! HMPH! WHEN I GET AROUND TO WRITING MY OWN FANFICS, HE WILL NOT BE IN THEM, UNLESS I AM MAKING HIM FAIL AT COMMITTING ACTS OF VILLIANY!
The worst honorary titan is:...PANTHA CUZ I DON'T GET HER "POWERS" OTHER THAN WRESTLING, WHICH IS NOT A POWER, BUT A HOBBY/SKILL.
The worst if the SIX main titans is:...either Robin or Cy. PLEASE DON'T HURT ME! They are the worst titans only cuz I like all the others just a little bit better, I like Robin and Cyborg, just not as much as Terra, Raven, Starfire, or Beast Boy, that's all.
| Echolove chapter 4 . 8/31/2013
Frilly pink dress...ugh
DIE YOU EVIL PINK THING THAT IS COVERED IN FRILLS AND SICKENING STUFF LIKE THAT, BURN TILL YOU BECOME NOTHING!
Okay, I feel better now that that is out of the way...
| Echolove chapter 3 . 8/31/2013
Here is my ... advice or whatever to each person
RAVEN: Torture BB more, he derserves it *evil grin*
Cy: *deep breath* GET OFF THE STUPID GAMESTATION! Do it, or else...
Shadow: HILARIOUS! *gives giant cookie to shadow* your first part where you are torturing them left me on the floor,
Here's what happened:
Echo: gets comfy and starts reading...
Cyborg: If Raven knows about that leg comment you're better off in here.
Beast Boy: (fearfully) You don't think she knows, do you?
Shadow: She didn't.
Beast Boy: (Relieved) I- (back to being scared beyond reason) What do you mean didn't. You mean doesn't, please tell me you mean doesn't.
Shadow: She didn't know so I took the liberty of informing her. (Doorbell rings) I wonder who that could possibly be... (Shouts over shoulder) Rave- I mean, whoever it is come on in!
Raven: (enters outraged) BEAST BOY! HOW DARE YOU TALK ABOUT ANY PART OF MY BODY LIKE THAT!
Beast Boy: (Runs from the furious Goth who's attempting to destroy him) AAAH! Raven! Can't we talk this over!
Echo: falls out of chair and hits face on floor laughing
Echo: manages to climb back into chair just a in time to read this:
Beast Boy: AAAAAAH! RAVEN, DON'T KILL ME!
Shadow: I love my job. I know this was mostly a filler chapter but in the next chapter Raven goes shopping!
Cyborg: I think Raven heard that.
Shadow: Oops. (Takes off running.)
Echo: falls out of chair once again and is on the floor
Echo: whines cause she spilled her popcorn,
"MY POPCORN! OH WHAT A HORRIBLE OCCURENCE THIS IS...
Echo: looks over at fanfic, grins, and comes to a conclusion,
"Oh well, the noble sacrifice of the god known only as popcorn was well worth it..."
Echo: Shadow, you must torture BB and Cy more...
| Echolove chapter 2 . 8/31/2013
BWAHAHAHAHA! *evil laugh*
Cyborg making that pic, and using it as blackmail, funny.
Loved how you made Raven suggest other girls.
Good so far! :)
| Echolove chapter 1 . 8/31/2013
The part about Raven having nice legs, HILARIOUS!
On to the next chapter...
DUN DUN DUNNNNNNNN
| BBxRae forever chapter 6 . 7/23/2013
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/8/2012
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/8/2012
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/8/2012
that was funny
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
that was very no super funny how about raven she got great legs really i cracked up when i read that raven better be is somyhing short purple silky tight that would be cut o and short dark purple boot hells or i am not going to laghf my heart out this came from my whole birthday party i jussted turned 15 :) :) (: