|Reviews for CSI: Los Angeles|
| lotzalove chapter 5 . 6/1/2012
this was really good and Id love a sequel :-D the LA team were very realistic :-) love it :-P
| Lumendea chapter 5 . 1/1/2007
Oh loved the end, nice symmetry with Californication.
| Lumendea chapter 4 . 1/1/2007
They're gonna sleep soundly tonight.
| Lumendea chapter 3 . 1/1/2007
Some more visual details would help a lot but still good.
| Lumendea chapter 2 . 1/1/2007
Love it, good story so far with a real good feel to it.
| Lumendea chapter 1 . 1/1/2007
Nice little song there Mel. Don't know much about CSI Vegas but I'll confess the LA team is interesting.
| almathea chapter 5 . 8/4/2005
I'm just putting a note on here to thank the people who have already reviewed. Your feedback is highly valued.
Once I get some more inspiration, I'll probably start on the sequel. :)
| wcspegasus chapter 5 . 8/3/2005
That was cute. Good job with the character development on the OCs, nice job of pacing, and a decent plot. I'd like to maybe see some of the spots that you sort of glossed past, but considering most of them were forensics, I realize that they might not be that easy to write. :) So, you're forgiven. *smiles*
And I think if there was a sequel I'd probably give it a read. You've got something pretty good going here.
| Thefartherside chapter 5 . 8/2/2005
Hi, I just wanted to let you know that I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I would love to read about more Rebekah/Tobias developments. Your OCs have great potential and aren't flat/boring. Great story.