Reviews for The Forgotten Vow
WRose chapter 26 . 7/2
Great
just me 5000 chapter 1 . 7/2
Great story throughout. I thought it was a very original idea that Jareth lied about her losing.
just me 5000 chapter 17 . 7/2
Great chapter. I love the labyrinth map. That is not something i have seen before. I miss ludo though
comical freaka chapter 26 . 10/24/2014
Bravo! Bravo! Splendid work! This is up on my favorite list!
MarieVance chapter 26 . 10/22/2014
You should really do a sequel to this!
comical freaka chapter 15 . 10/22/2014
I really love your style of writing. . Full of heat yet has a great plot line and playful too..
nekochan1994 chapter 3 . 8/27/2014
officially feel devestated
nekochan1994 chapter 2 . 8/27/2014
1.) oh dear.

2.) technically she isn't 21 until the hour of her birth passes.
Mary-Sue chapter 24 . 7/23/2014
Fowl Play indeed. That was the bad joke of the day. Love this story.
Bloodsired chapter 26 . 6/27/2014
love the story! Nice characterization of Jareth and Sarah.
Monki-Neko chapter 19 . 11/4/2013
oh wow, i really thought that this was one version where she did lose only added with the twist of making her think she won-but it turns out that the real twist is that she DID win and HE had lied to her! and that, that is the reason for why the labyrinth is going all wonky! wow. i totally did not see that coming.
TashaRose chapter 26 . 9/9/2013
Wonderful story. Great idea. Excellent characters. Top notch from start to finish.
arcangeldjr chapter 10 . 7/11/2013
Oh Sarah, Sarah, Sarah. Of *course* it's alcohol, my dear. (shakes head)
arcangeldjr chapter 8 . 7/11/2013
I really appreciate your take on Sarah, not the usual cliches of screaming and stomping like a brat or swooning and wetting her panties because Jareth is soooo hottt. I think her reaction to the room was perfectly reasonable.
Rose chapter 26 . 6/5/2013
Very sweet. I really liked this! Great job!
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