Reviews for The Secret of the royal family
Pussin Boots chapter 5 . 8/8/2005
NIce! Upload soon! But like i said, longer, maybe less frequent chappies would be better...
nativewildmage chapter 5 . 8/8/2005
so she still gets combat training. Fun. keep up the good work.
Kathryn Bellalyse chapter 4 . 8/8/2005
I like it so please hurry and add more.
On top of cloud 9 chapter 5 . 8/8/2005
i dont like short chapters...i dont start school till september...im lucky! :) good chapter!
Pussin Boots chapter 4 . 8/8/2005
NIce. i like it! Longer would be better and uplaod soon!
On top of cloud 9 chapter 4 . 8/7/2005
ok gotcha...is this gonna be an AJ?
nativewildmage chapter 4 . 8/7/2005
Very good! Short, but good! They clicked quickly. Update please! Please and thank you!
nativewildmage chapter 3 . 8/7/2005
This gives a new light to the dark side of Roald. Wait, that didn't make sense. Whatever. But this is very good, keep up the good work. And maybe try to get longer chapters? But keep up the good work! Update!
thingy of um thingyness chapter 3 . 8/7/2005
This is really dark scary!
Elfsquire90 chapter 3 . 8/6/2005
good chapter I like reading this story to bad about what happens to Jon and Alanna though.
Mercury-Shadowfeather chapter 3 . 8/6/2005
you know i usually don'tlike short chapter's but the ones you write are good. i've read som where there is no detail and it's all plain which in the end boring and short. yours are detailed but also to the point i find it nice
Pussin Boots chapter 3 . 8/6/2005
NIce,but fast and they accepted it too fast and told about Jon to Alanna to soon, they wouldnt trust that easily, but nice and upload soon!
On top of cloud 9 chapter 3 . 8/6/2005
poor alanna...poor jon...so i take it alanna's not going to become a knight...
ikot-ikot chapter 2 . 8/6/2005
oh! i know i'm gonna lurv your fic! you gotta continue!
TwilightBrightStar chapter 2 . 8/5/2005
Great story, sorry i could not review early
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