Reviews for Memories in the Rain
Elise chapter 4 . 10/18/2013
Very intriguing! I like it. :)
The Whimsical Ermine chapter 4 . 3/17/2013

May the Muse hit you in the face :)
Hotaru Vie Jaegerjaquez chapter 4 . 12/8/2012
The name Kuchiki Ichimaru really made me laughing...

I'll look forward for the next chapter... Please update soon XD
Ppsh chapter 2 . 3/8/2012
Not too bad, I sort of like the premise. However there are two very significant and obvious plot hole.

First of all Shinigami don't advance very quickly. Hitsugaya is known as a prodigy in Soul Society for becoming a Captain at a young age... and yet he is still over 50 years old. Rukia is known to be Lieutenant level (she's held back by Byakuya) and she's at least 100 years old. Renji is at least as old as Rukia as well as a Lieutenant.

Realistically I don't see how Ichigo could have made it to Lieutenant within such a short span of time. Even the academy is traditionally I think 6 years, assuming he got into it right when he died it would still put him as going from an unseated member of a squad to Lieutenant in less than 5 years, which I'm pretty sure is nigh impossible.

Secondly, and probably more importantly (after all we know Ichigo advances at a prodiguous rate in canon, so the first point isn't SO bad), which is that Ichigo can't possibly look like a teenager. I refer to Hitsugaya again, as well as Yachiru. Both are presumably quite old. Hitsugaya is at least 50, Yachiru I'm uncertain about but probably older than him. The fact that Yamamoto is over 2,000 years old and actually looks old points out that people probably age... but even that is uncertain, as Unohana is known to be at least half his age yet doesn't look very old.

The point is Ichigo would still look the same age as when he died. And if he doesn't, well, then neither would half the canon characters. People either don't age at all in Soul Society, or they age tremendously slowly. Isshin himself is probably several hundred years old. He was a former captain after all.
K.N chapter 4 . 7/17/2009
This is awesome!... hey, wait... *looks at publish date* ...

What a coincidence, the publish date was my 10th birthday...

But still, please update this! It's too cool (and funny) a fic not to! I wonder how the Ichigo in this fic would react to finding out he stole the name of a traitor?
jen3572005 chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
oh i like this story ill have to keep an eye on this, great job;)
99997777733 chapter 4 . 11/25/2008

I can't wait to see what happens next _

Keep up the good work!
Danni Lea chapter 4 . 6/16/2008
Poor Ichigo!
Aftonen chapter 4 . 6/1/2008
Aw how cute! and yet *sniff* so sad! TT
SolitaryWordsmith chapter 4 . 2/26/2008
Good fic
BoomboomPOWWWW chapter 4 . 8/28/2007
I LOVE IT! Keep updating!
knuckz chapter 4 . 8/15/2007
very interesting possibility..
Lalaith Quetzalli chapter 4 . 5/26/2007
This is so sweet and yet so sad!

I'm just gonna cry!

Is this gonna be an IchiRukia? I would really like that.

And are you gonna update sometime soon?

I hope so, because this story seems really interesting.
The Meta chapter 4 . 3/30/2007
Aww. The ending was sad... Poor Ichigo. Anyway, I like where this is going. Its funny, well written, and has a good plot. Can't wait til the next chapter!
lambtastic chapter 4 . 3/16/2007
you know i never knew ichigo's dad was a death god! a captain too! lol. that's wear ichigo got his inhuman spirit powers! please continue soon!
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