I know it's been a long time since you've made this, but I gotta say, pulling some heart strings here man.
Peace and Love

This series is worth the read, unlike most good KP Fics it's not mission driven geared towards defeating an unknown known villain. the bound between Ron n Kim are established on a different level based on Monkey Power, can't go with a MMP prohecy.

What works is also the development of Brick n Monique's relationship. All an all a good story

i think u should keep going with this story like do a nother squale with kim and ron back in school this time with there friends and new begings and maybe a pop the quesiton thing with kim and ron well u know and keep the story rolling theres a lot to tell so get cooking dude as always rock on and rock hard on the high way to hell lol by ac/dc thy best rock group of all time

really quite good and i am loving the "smuff."

Big fan,

Ernest

You are good, my man. While there is a lot of emphasis on the physical aspect of the teen's relationships, you got the emotional ones perfect too. Have you been getting help from some actual teens?

I loved that last image of the fireworks. Your story, with tweaks to fit into season four, would have been a great finale, even better than the beach party thing Disney did.

What was your opinion of season four?

Cliff hangers are the staple of a good serial. For good or ill, that is what we are writing with our multichapter stories. You have it down to a science. If this were film, your end notes would be voiced by that overly dramatic movie announcer.

Retro film, just like the nineteen thirties.

Hey man, I read The Biggest Mission Ever and this one, and the deleted scenes. I love you how you brought Brick and Monique into the mix. everyone was in character and you brought light to those that were previously undeveloped. I really hope to see some more writing by you soon! Can't wait to read it.

Okay, if you keep this up, you’re definitely gonna make a Dirty Old Duck out of me. Smuff indeed. This kind of stuff can be dangerous for a guy my age, especially as you so blatantly pointed out that these two are legally . . . you know . . . in many states.

Other that that, great story as usual. Action, adventure, lus — opps losing it again.

Time for me to go swim in my pond. My COLD pond.

The Wise Duck

great story, i enjoyed it much, excellent

Great story! Love it! Yea! Absolutely love it! A sequel perchance? ]

Another wonderfully smuffy fic, matt. I really enjoyed this; everything from Shego and Drakken's banter to Mr. Dr. Possible's thinking on the tweeb's genius. And, of course, the smuffiness betwen Kim and Ron - and Monique and Brick, too! :)

Yo I like both stories to this, very very good, I hope you keep it up. Very dramatic it how I like it, you action, romance, deep subjects, and the "adult sence were good though you cut at some good parts :_(, I always like good fluff when the story is interesting to read.

Keep up the work and I will keep cheeking on your works

Power corrupts unless you can give it away willingly.

Nothing to say that hasn't already been said. Great freaking chapter, dude.

I share your feelings, sir. That was very romantic, very moving. I swear Kim is gonna be able to tell her Ron from that syntho-fake no prob. At least I hope so.