|Reviews for Don't Touch My Monkey|
| NieYanMLC chapter 9 . 5/10/2020
I know it's been a long time since you've made this, but I gotta say, pulling some heart strings here man.
Peace and Love
| vase chapter 9 . 11/24/2010
This series is worth the read, unlike most good KP Fics it's not mission driven geared towards defeating an unknown known villain. the bound between Ron n Kim are established on a different level based on Monkey Power, can't go with a MMP prohecy.
What works is also the development of Brick n Monique's relationship. All an all a good story
| taz0718twoaol.com chapter 9 . 6/8/2009
i think u should keep going with this story like do a nother squale with kim and ron back in school this time with there friends and new begings and maybe a pop the quesiton thing with kim and ron well u know and keep the story rolling theres a lot to tell so get cooking dude as always rock on and rock hard on the high way to hell lol by ac/dc thy best rock group of all time
| ErnestTheGuy chapter 9 . 7/25/2008
really quite good and i am loving the "smuff."
| Thomas Linquist chapter 9 . 4/23/2008
You are good, my man. While there is a lot of emphasis on the physical aspect of the teen's relationships, you got the emotional ones perfect too. Have you been getting help from some actual teens?
I loved that last image of the fireworks. Your story, with tweaks to fit into season four, would have been a great finale, even better than the beach party thing Disney did.
What was your opinion of season four?
| Thomas Linquist chapter 7 . 4/23/2008
Cliff hangers are the staple of a good serial. For good or ill, that is what we are writing with our multichapter stories. You have it down to a science. If this were film, your end notes would be voiced by that overly dramatic movie announcer.
Retro film, just like the nineteen thirties.
| TheRondo chapter 9 . 1/5/2008
Hey man, I read The Biggest Mission Ever and this one, and the deleted scenes. I love you how you brought Brick and Monique into the mix. everyone was in character and you brought light to those that were previously undeveloped. I really hope to see some more writing by you soon! Can't wait to read it.
| The Wise Duck chapter 9 . 1/7/2007
Okay, if you keep this up, you’re definitely gonna make a Dirty Old Duck out of me. Smuff indeed. This kind of stuff can be dangerous for a guy my age, especially as you so blatantly pointed out that these two are legally . . . you know . . . in many states.
Other that that, great story as usual. Action, adventure, lus — opps losing it again.
Time for me to go swim in my pond. My COLD pond.
The Wise Duck
| CastaS chapter 9 . 9/23/2006
great story, i enjoyed it much, excellent
| Scyth3 chapter 9 . 9/12/2006
Great story! Love it! Yea! Absolutely love it! A sequel perchance? ]
| Amarin Rose chapter 9 . 2/18/2006
Another wonderfully smuffy fic, matt. I really enjoyed this; everything from Shego and Drakken's banter to Mr. Dr. Possible's thinking on the tweeb's genius. And, of course, the smuffiness betwen Kim and Ron - and Monique and Brick, too! :)
| Drelufon chapter 9 . 12/21/2005
Yo I like both stories to this, very very good, I hope you keep it up. Very dramatic it how I like it, you action, romance, deep subjects, and the "adult sence were good though you cut at some good parts :_(, I always like good fluff when the story is interesting to read.
Keep up the work and I will keep cheeking on your works
| daywalkr82 chapter 8 . 11/24/2005
Power corrupts unless you can give it away willingly.
| daywalkr82 chapter 6 . 11/24/2005
Nothing to say that hasn't already been said. Great freaking chapter, dude.
| daywalkr82 chapter 5 . 11/24/2005
I share your feelings, sir. That was very romantic, very moving. I swear Kim is gonna be able to tell her Ron from that syntho-fake no prob. At least I hope so.