|Reviews for Hiccups|
| aozora ekusutashii chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
I laughed quite a lot in this story. Jirou is certainly quite a character, ne? :)
...the fact that he was licking Atobe's beauty mole and was given permission to do it next time just cracked me up XD
Great writing :D
| nibeijia chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
Aww! Jiroh's so smart! I didn't get the innuendo at the end the first time I read it XD Awesome story.
| Makayla chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
I just absolutely adore the image of Atobe panicking XD and Jiroh giving him eskimo kisses adorable!
| VictorianLegend07 chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
WaiWaiWai KAWAIIKAWAIIKAWAIIA FAVE! Yay! Love them, Love this :)
| Yudachi chapter 1 . 12/20/2008
Yay for AtoJi!
| Songs of Angry Jelly Babies chapter 1 . 6/5/2008
Such a cute fic! Jiroh is positively adorable!
| Ethuiliel chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
Best. Story. Ever. Not one of my most eloquent reviews, but this deserved SOMETHING more than just a quick "add to favorites". So yeah. It was amazing.
| CrazyGirlofManyNames chapter 1 . 8/20/2007
Hehe, that's so cute.
| Yabuki Yuuri chapter 1 . 3/5/2007
The ending was just... Amazing. xD
Especially the, "Wait... so does that mean I can lick you again later?" For some reason I can just imagine Jiroh saying that in such an innocent way. xD
And the last sentence. xDD
| sendoh11 chapter 1 . 2/19/2007
this is nice. hope u can write more.
| Mrs Hatake Itachi chapter 1 . 12/19/2006
| SeparatedCow chapter 1 . 12/7/2006
Yesh, Atobe's beauty mark, the thing that I stare at for hours wondering how the hell...why the hell...it's just...that..well...
Just...Great story. XD
| Sheik's Lonely chapter 1 . 9/15/2006
It's beautifully written. And it's funny in an almost subtle way. It doesn't TRY to shove the humor up your nose.
I love it with a passion. And the way Jiroh and Atobe act is perfect.
Way to be in denial Atobe.
And way to be...yourself Jiroh.
| merissala chapter 1 . 6/18/2006
oh gosh, this is funny, i laughed really weirdly when i read this, cuz.. gosh it's soo funny!
| Hyne's Descendant chapter 1 . 1/9/2006
ho ho unexpected couple, but cute all the same