Reviews for A Destiny Altered
alex chapter 21 . 7/28/2009
this was the best chapter ever
vincent1875 chapter 29 . 6/28/2008
great story. I can't believe I missed when you finished it. That's the third story I found I missed finishing today while updating my favorites list. Thanks for the great read.
ShadowBack chapter 29 . 10/21/2007
It was a great story! I like this end...
ShadowBack chapter 27 . 10/21/2007
The flashback is interesting...
ShadowBack chapter 26 . 10/21/2007
I like the fights...
ShadowBack chapter 25 . 10/21/2007
I like the idea about Naruto chakra. It's interesting to see Hinata doubts...
Ishamoridin chapter 5 . 10/16/2007
Nice fic, grammar errors aside. ONe thing I noticed just before I thought to review is that you've called Chiyo 'Chiyobaa'. Naruto calls her CHiyo-baasama because 'baasama' is similar to the english 'granny', he's just talking to her how he talks to all old people, lol.
Necal chapter 2 . 10/13/2007
your really messing up the way you make naruto. he would be well aware that it is possilb eot move faster than rock lee.
Kyuubi no Kitsune0101 chapter 29 . 10/5/2007
Oh My Gosh! I can't believe it's ending this way! That's completely awsome, but I thought this would go longer, but it's a great fanfic! I love this story!
Nostalgic Beauty chapter 1 . 9/9/2007
Nice opener
Shinsou Tengen Wabisuke chapter 29 . 8/29/2007
Heh, oh well. Can't wait.
Ero-kun chapter 28 . 8/19/2007
I found this story just today but I'm really impressed. Plot is great, everything is great! Since You are goin' to write final chapter I musrt say this: I hope You'll write another story like this. This is awesome.

I'm lookin' forward for last chapter, ja ne!
Sorrow's Edge chapter 28 . 8/18/2007
I'm not a huge fan of the number of OCs, but other than that, this story is awesome! I can't wait for the conclusion!
vincent1875 chapter 28 . 8/18/2007
Great story.
Nemonite chapter 3 . 8/18/2007
Huge mistake here dude.

Lee slowly walked towards Neji until he was in rage of Neji’s new attack, the Hakke Rokujuyon Sho technique. Neji shouted his new found technique rushing at Lee hitting him with two fingers blocking his chakra holes. The surrounding chakra around Lee faded as Lee lye on the ground in pain.

“ You’ve made a mistake Neji-san. You must’ve forgot, I don’t use Chakra!” Lee shouted as he rushed at Neji at a normal speed.

“ Hakkesho Kaiten!” Lee tried to stop himself at that point from rushing forward, but it was too late. Neji spun around creating a chakra barrier that was used in an offense and defense way. Lee soared through the air like a dashing bullet skidding across the grass causing dirt to rise.

Lee wouldn't have been able to get up after Lee hit his chakra points, mainly because, he may not use chakra in jutsu, but every human being needs chakra to survive, its their life line, just like blood. Now, Lee has under-developed chakra coils, meaning that they did not develop right when he was born, this allows him to only live because it only allows a small amount of chakra to pass through the chakra gates into his body, this is only enough however, to keep him alive, not enough for him to use. Now Neji would have sealed the points, not allowing chakra to certain points in his body, such as his legs, making it impossible to move.
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