|Reviews for In Undertones|
| cynereligion chapter 23 . 11/7/2013
Aw this was such a lovely fic
| Ayumi Warui chapter 23 . 9/5/2009
First things first... Wow, you are the very first person I've known that writes her OWN lyrics in a fanfiction! I loved all of them, really, especially "For You" and "Drive You Crazy", that last more in its first version, the one Naruto read in the first or second chapter. Why the shorter version? Because it was a little darker I guess xD. Never mind, ALL lyrics are awesome!
I loved de fic too, don't worry xD While I was reading it I was thinking that it would have been great to be part of a band when I was young enough xD, I love music, lyrics and singing, but I cant play an instrument xD. Sharingan was great! I loved all them, really, especially Sasuke and Naruto, of course, and Sakura, Ino, Kiba and Hinata. Only one time before, I had seen Ino and Sakura as a couple, and I liked it, but, in your fic, they really are perfect one for another. I liked that enthusiastic girls xD And Hinata is so sweet, with a puppy in her arms :3 Kiba always is cool in fanfics, is the ideal best friend for Naruto, and in your fic he has a gentle side with Hinata, so aw! xD
Finally, Naruto and Sasuke. I liked Sasuke the most, I liked the way you put him: the way he acts, the way he thinks and his reflexions in the first part of the fic. I prefered him as a narrator than Naruto, but I also liked Naruto. I supose it is beacuse Naruto is a transparent person and in part one you can comprehend perfectly him, but Sasuke is a closed person that in part two sometimes you don't know what is thinking and you think: I want to know what is going on in this head! xD Naruto is all joy, as ever, and we all love him that way, I guess xD
In resume: a great fic, I liked it from the beginning to the end. I saw in your profile that this fic have a second part. Is it going on or is it discontinued? I normally only read complete fics, and I don't know if is better wait to you to finish the second part for begin to read it. well, I'll put you in alerts to know if you update it :P
Well, sorry about my poor english, please (I'm spanish and my english sucks, I know it u.u). I hope, at least, you understand the review xD. I hope you are having a good time now, it have been a long time since you wrote that fic My best wishes for you! See ya!
| The Only Love For Soujiro Seta chapter 23 . 4/30/2009
I loved the story!
| destiny chapter 4 . 3/16/2009
just felt like pointing this out but did you know uzumaki also means whirlpool
| DamianSasuke chapter 23 . 6/12/2008
love it it took me a while to read as i've been busy with college work, but i love it and i'm about to read the sequel _
| allanimehere chapter 23 . 3/4/2008
LOVE YOUR STORIES XD
Thanks for the tears and laughs...I almost wanted to kill you midway through the story...LOL
Thanks again...please start writing the second part to different season...i can't sleep at night due to the ending of different seasons LOL Thanks again
| L Kagamine chapter 4 . 2/10/2008
It's spelled "Gaara" not "Garra". Sorry, he's my fave, I must correct things like that. :[
| Zozwen chapter 23 . 12/4/2007
Nice story. I really liked the lemon at the end. It's not like the other lemons I've read. The way you wrote it was new to me. I always have the feeling the lemons are just copy and past. There exactly the same, only to satisfy the reader or something cause most of the time it doesn't fit the story, It doesn't fit the writingstyle, and the storyline (dating for a week and going like rabbits- yeah believeble). The characters are to young or/and inexperienced for what's happening in the lemon like it's just there to convince the reader to keep on reading while it's absolutly irrelevant for the story
But back to youre lemon. I like it. It fits in every aspect. They're a bit clumsy and insecure. And thank god you didn't go like he was terrible pain and suddenly his "spot" was hit and send him straight to heaven. It was realistic in my eyes and well I like it :D
| shirilyle chapter 23 . 12/4/2007
u should make a sequal its good
| mack chapter 23 . 11/23/2007
oh man oh man that was so good, i like how Itachi was not a bad guy and so were the others and that all of the characters just played their roles like they should. especially how you did half the story in Sasuke's perspective and the other half in Naruto's. it was just so good, im glad i had the chancve to read the whole thing in one go.
thanks for the awsome read!
| kitty-ness chapter 23 . 9/25/2007
umm...honestly, holay shite. that's got to be the best friggin sasunaru/band ever! like, seriously! i loved it, almost not even funny. i swear, so awesome. i'm prolly gonna check out ur other stories too. if u see me, u'll know it's cuz i like ur writing.
| c1trus chapter 16 . 8/19/2007
I don't blame Naruto, I punch the crap out of Sasuke too.
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| penguins-ate-me chapter 23 . 7/2/2007
aww! that was the best music AU Naruto fic I've ever read1!
and Itachi was nice and sweet! yay!
I love the lyrics and the way you described the tempo and the beat
music truly is love