|Reviews for Will You Marry Me?|
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/18
sakura dying? what a blessing lol
| miss tobii chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
T-T sasuke... went... Menal? Sakura... died? Waaaaah! So sad! But I still liked the story in a demented way .
| Anko Uchiha chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
OMG! IT WAS SO SAD! BUT IN A GOOD A WAY. AWESOME JOB! GOOD STORY KEEP ON WRITING MORE1 ]
| pinkmuffinz chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
why did you make me cry? T_T
| UchihaSakuraxItachi chapter 1 . 4/7/2008
EVIL! -hides in a dark room in a corner crying-
| Crimson StarShower chapter 1 . 10/27/2007
That was horribly sad...It didn't make me wanna cut open my Sasuke plushie however...I hugged him...Yes,I have a chibi-Sasuke plushie...it's cute...
| broken blossom chapter 1 . 8/9/2007
i have some tears in my eyes and am im crying while reviewing this hurt me a lot cuz sakura is my fav character and sasuke also and their my fav couples cuz i know that dep down sasuke does care a lil bit for sakura in the series why would he say thank you to her befuh leaving her and that's why am crying cuz i hate death fictions cuz i always cry anyway it was really hurting and nice story
| CommanderCousland chapter 1 . 6/18/2007
I'm have some tears to shed...
| Mistress Sakura-hime chapter 1 . 6/18/2007
Sasuke went crazy! WOOT!,But why did Sakura-chan die?
| haha chapter 1 . 7/11/2006
holy shit she died omg HA that was funny in a scary way
| Ninja's Ocular chapter 1 . 5/28/2006
I'm sorry! Sorry! Very sorry! (X_x) It didn't make me cry. On the contrary, I'm torn between being amused and disappointed. To be completely honest with you, I believe the transitions between scenes were too choppy, and the scenes lacked detail and length. You could have inserted a scene in between the first (Sakura runs to "whatever place her feet took her") and second (when Sasuke finds the letter) scene, where Sakura contemplates upon Sasuke and her relationship thus far, which would appreciatively give your audience a better idea on what stage their relationship was at so far. The only clue you gave us was that Sasuke had feelings for her for eleven years, which sounds absolutely ridiculous at the time because Sakura admits that she's been asking him out every day for eleven years, and he STILL hasn't said yes—even though he wants to. Then, out of nowhere, we get the idea that Sasuke wants to MARRY Sakura. Like I stated before, no harm intended, your scenes are a bit too choppy. I think the whole suicide angle in this story is a great idea (who wouldn't want to end it all, after getting cursed by your crush that you've followed like a lost puppy for eleven years?), but there were some aspects of your story that you could've put more effort into, in order to make it more believable. Without it, I just felt mildly sympathetic for poor Uchiha-san and Haruno-san.
With that previous disorderly paragraph typed and over with, I'd like to say that I enjoyed reading your story nonetheless! It was a refreshing new angle at SasuSaku relationships that I'd never really thought about writing. The "Konoha Mental Hospital" was a nice touch at the end as well. I couldn't help myself; I had to admit that I was amused at the mental image of Sasuke stuck in a mental hospital. I am deeply and truly sorry if that was neither the response you were aiming for nor desiring to hear from me, but I feel that I should be honest with you. Despite some flaws, I enjoyed reading this fiction very much! So thank you!
| sasuke fanatic1 chapter 1 . 5/20/2006
Why Sakura why? Oh, the sadness! Poor Sasuke-kun!
| sakura whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy chapter 1 . 5/18/2006
wh you killed sakura why! then you put sasuke in a mental hospital you suck
| irmaerica chapter 1 . 4/27/2006
aw..thats so sweet...
| Olga-Bonhilda Maria-Belle chapter 1 . 4/19/2006
Nyu, He was too stubborn! Why did she have to die! TT~TT