Reviews for There Was A Thing
MsDevin92 chapter 1 . 1/21/2007
"There is a place…

Not very far…

Something new!

As though by mistake…

Some clandestine door was

Left ajar."

That was my favorite part. :) This was beautiful. It sounded like a song to me.
Soontobedeleted chapter 1 . 9/17/2005
Hmm..poems are very hard however I do think you managed to do it much better than most people. My favorite line is tattered heart.

Looking back over this it is really great and reminds me of the last moment of the Nightmare Before Christmas.

(This is Klia...ahem I mean Psychoporn and I believe that you should post Psychonauts on if they ever get around to adding it.)
Rutledge chapter 1 . 9/1/2005
what? no reviews! awesome poem, i am currently reading your NBC fic, the law of your anarchic demise and luving it! keep up the great work, and i havent signed in because we are in school! but my username is Rutledge, and again, keep it up!

Frizzy chapter 1 . 8/7/2005
I don't think I get this poem too well but I have to say, you really know a way with words. All I can say now is good job. Good job.