|Reviews for Somewhere I Belong III|
| Bookwormefm chapter 19 . 2/25
Well, I did it! Finished the whole trilogy. It was incredible, and I enjoyed it a lot. Well, you know, I didn't enjoy the abuse or anything, but the story its self was fantastic. I love bonding between Snape and Harry. I have to say that I think the second one was my favorite. It became pretty clear that Severus cared for Harry then and I loved it. The drama between father and son was... Unfortunate in the beginning, but I knew it would work out. :) It was a fantastic trilogy. I can't wait to read more of your work.
| Harrypotterfan chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
I love your story iv read all them in order but I don't think you should have made potter such a weak link, but I still love him of course!:D
| takingitinstride chapter 19 . 12/6/2013
Wow I just loved this saga. I know you said this was the end but if you really should make a fourth one... I will be following and Favorited just in case you change your mind ;)
| honore chapter 19 . 11/22/2013
You have really outdone yourself. Mystery, angst, intrigue, you had it all. Well done. Thanks
| Kahlanmausi chapter 19 . 11/17/2013
I actually really don't know where to start. :D I read all three parts of this story, and really enjoyed it. It was just awesome! :)
Trying to recall everything I remember that in the first part it was all about Jeb, right? Though I really did not like that little bastard, you wrote him great. It seemed really authentic and I was scared a few times to be honest. That guy was just creepy, or so I thought. Loved how you developed the relationship between Snape and Harry. :) How he grew to care for the boy and the other way around. :) You had an amazing plot and I couldn't stop reading. :) This whole thing with the guardian ship was well written and thought-through too, like the reactions of Harrys friends were too. :) To stop here: first part was just amazing and I thought it couldn't get any better, or worse. ;)
The second part was about this professor and the adoption, right? Really well done too. Dillard was creepier than Jeb and that was a good thing, otherwise it would've been boring though some times I really wanted to throw something away because of what that idiot did or said. Whatever, it wasn't as bad as the fight with Voldemort. That really scared the hell out of me at one point or another. All the things he did to Harry or people he cared about. Like when the Weasley house exploded which almost killed Molly. Love you for letting her live! :D So...so great that Severus adopted Harry! *-* And the first time he called him dad! *-* Oh that was so cute! *-* Also Harry started using wandless magic then, huh? Awesome how you wrote it and made everything up. :) Lupin and Black were great characters in those part, too. ;D And how Voldemort got killed in the end...loved that scene. :) How Harry actually didn't knew how he did that...oh and now I remember that with Del...I was so glad when Harry healed her, you can't imagine! :D
The last part was the best I have to admit. It was so very well written and the plot...it was kinda gruesome and hard to read at times (you probably which scenes I refer to) but how you described all the emotions, the angst, anger, was good. It really was though it wasn't nice to read. I don't want to imagine anything like that happening to my people and I almost cried because it touched me how he had to deal with all this...alone, sort of. I loved especially how you ended things. Your epilogue was awesome and I always dreamt of an ending like this. :) (Y)
Draco...I wasn't sure how to think about him at first and his behaviour but the more he appeared the more I started liking him. The last two chapters were the best, they grew even closer together and Snape finally adopted Draco too. :)
I am sad though, that there's no further explanation of how those Death Eaters got to Snape Manor in first placed... :(
It was an amazing and wonderful saga and I loved reading it. :) I hope I didn't forgot anything, but sure did...
Go on like this. :)
All the best,
PS: Not a Native speaker, I'm sorry for any mistake! :S
| Allie Danger chapter 19 . 10/22/2013
Ill miss you
| TheLostRogue13x chapter 19 . 8/26/2013
These 3 sets of stories are the best i've ever read,honestly I love them so much I felt so many different emotions,in particular when Harry was sexually abused by vernon and that was his locked memory I was bawling my eyes out! You are one of the most skilled writers ever to grace the internet and your stories really are masterpieces! _
| Galen chapter 19 . 7/2/2013
Read the whole series in three days. Well written, good plot, nicely detailed. Thanks.
| That Gryffindor Flame chapter 19 . 11/1/2012
I. Absolutely. Loved. This.
I started reading the first one in the trilogy 11 o clock last night, i finished the second at 5 this morning, and finished this one was 4:20 in the afternoon. I have become EXTREMELY attacted to these characters! They are amazing and you are an amazing writer. I loved how you made Harry's pain last through all three novels, but how it only really came to closure once Draco was his brother. LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT. You are going to be a professional author right? Because if you aren't, I am SO disappointed. Congratulations on the best Harry Potter fanfiction I have EVER read in my entire life, and I read a damn lot of it. I hope you contuine to write in the future and thank you for allowing me to read this amazement :D
p.s this was sort of a review for all three novels :D
| beta chapter 17 . 10/25/2012
You say in this chapter that Draco had never before been to the Burrow, but he'd actually spent the night there on a cot, in a room with Harry and Ron. Also, after everyone gets to headquarters, you fail to mention Jenson or give him a cup of tea when everyone else gets one.
| Guest chapter 16 . 10/25/2012
I can't imagine why in the world Harry would worry about Zane being loose, since Zane is always loose. There was no reason to chase him into the woods as if he were a domestic pet instead of an independent sentient being who has taken care of himself for years. There was a comment from Sirius about how he can relate to Zane's protective attitude. Zane actually seems 10 times smarter and emotionally mature and stable than Sirius.
| guest chapter 14 . 10/25/2012
It's interesting that in your characterization of Harry, he constantly lies throughout all three stories, and has no redeeming features whatsoever. He has had a traumatic life, and it is no wonder that people pity him and want to help him, but I can not see any reason that anyone would actually like him or want him to be their friend.
| Lilah T chapter 19 . 8/16/2012
This is really a wonderful story!
I like sad stories and Severitus and when Draco changes to the light side. This ff combines these things and I love it!
The only thing I noticed is that there are a few tiny plot-mistakes, like that you once wrote that Draco had never been at the Burrow when he was there earlier. Those mistakes aren't important at all and I doubt that many people even notice them but I wanted to tell you so you can decide on your own what you do with them.
| sylvelle chapter 13 . 8/10/2012
Did the yard eat Hermione? She disappeared in this chapter.
| BeLlIxiEs chapter 19 . 6/27/2012
This and i enjoyed every single moment of it.