|Reviews for Tamed|
| iamking chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
thank you for having hotspot and wildebeast as the temps.i dont know if they will be in this story that much,but you get points just for choosing them.i look forward to chapter 2(which i'm about to read.
some of this review(or later ones)is deleted i apologise,my ipod is an idiot.
| detrametal chapter 27 . 7/16/2013
a very interesting story with a brilliant take on things, I enjoyed reading you're story and wish you all the best with your future endevors
| Boulder-West chapter 19 . 6/28/2013
| ThoughtsLightAndFireAndSound chapter 27 . 6/22/2013
haha it was cool to see your thought process like that. though i did skim a bit since i've read a lot in the past 24 hours. his fic and some now other stuff haha
anywayz, lovely story
i love how you thoroughly explored raven's emotions with an original idea! i do feel that bb could have had more time with cullen, since i felt his part was significantly shorter
other than that i really enjoyed this story
fantastic characterization! your portrayals of bb and rae were wonderful. i felt that bb was really sweet and you also gave him more depth and maturity that was cool to see in him! raven was also written in character while realistically exploring the other facets of her personality i reckon
i did imagine them older though, but that may just be me :D
also loved the interactions between bb and rae it was cool to see how their relationship developed
i did feel the second half felt slower, but regardless, this was a lovely read!
fantastic story, thank you
| ThoughtsLightAndFireAndSound chapter 24 . 6/22/2013
so that's how old they are haha
my mind imagined them older since i felt your writing portrayed more maturity in them
i'm looking forward to the finale!
interesting to see scarecrow in this now too
| ThoughtsLightAndFireAndSound chapter 19 . 6/22/2013
i'd crack the joke and say 'finally!' but i'm certain that's been done to death. so i'll just say yay!
i absolutely love the embarrassment and discomfort you put raven through this chapter haha
and it was also funny to have bb faint again XD
| ThoughtsLightAndFireAndSound chapter 12 . 6/22/2013
haha, bb fainting at the end of their date. epic.
| ThoughtsLightAndFireAndSound chapter 9 . 6/22/2013
that was incredibly sweet :3
easily my favorite chapter so far!
| ThoughtsLightAndFireAndSound chapter 8 . 6/22/2013
i really like how emotionally intense this is starting to become! great handling of the beast too, it was written realistically i reckon
you really did your work on this
and i absolutely love your chapter titles! in hindsight it all really does make sense
love your writing
| ThoughtsLightAndFireAndSound chapter 7 . 6/22/2013
nicely handled! haha, i like how you didn't rush them together, but the whole changing into someone else does gives me the creeps
must be really painful for bb emotionally too, i can only imagine
question tho, sorry if i missed it, how old are they here?
i'm imagining 17, 18? but i'm not sure, so i thought i'd ask :)
| ThoughtsLightAndFireAndSound chapter 6 . 6/22/2013
very cool take on raven's different personas! i find it highly logical and plausible
good job on this chapter!
| ThoughtsLightAndFireAndSound chapter 3 . 6/22/2013
i love the premise of this story, and i feel that you've laid it all out very well! very intriguing too, and i am looking forward to reading on and finding out how things unfold
personally, the whole stuck on an island plot makes me cringe at how cliché it is, but so far i like your take on it
i also really like the maturity you've given bb in this, nice portrayal
very interesting concept of having raven split herself into pieces too! i'm interested to how you'll run with that
wonderful work so far
| SilentGreenThief chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
Ahhh. Just rediscovered this little gem after a while of not being able to find it. Funny how you're always able to find stuff when you're not looking for it, but be unable to find it when you are looking.
Going to enjoy re-reading this, I love this fic. The character development and the slowly-built relationship between Beast Boy and Raven is gorgeous. :3
| Manga154 chapter 5 . 9/28/2012
Ok, if white means she is whole...
Then black would represent a void in emotion...
| Playsintherainicorn chapter 10 . 8/3/2012
"You mean you pictured him with a beautiful, caring, loving person who had trouble controlling her powers?"
-applauds- Wisdom? You go girl! ;D