|Reviews for Tamed|
| Concolor44 chapter 10 . 1/1/2014
"He'd been smiling so much that his cheeks were getting sore." I know that feeling. I had that same expression on my face a lot of the time after my wife and I started going together. It's a pretty good feeling.
Raven's "joining" scene with Wisdom was a pure delight!
Yeah, growing pains hurt ... but then you grow!
| Concolor44 chapter 9 . 1/1/2014
Nevermore is one of my favorite places, and your incarnation of Raven's Emotions one of the best I've seen anywhere. This was simply beautiful.
Also, BB is edging upward in my list of Best Leading Men in Fanfiction. He's just, as I feel sure Happy would say, a super guy!
On the strength of what I've read to date, this story goes into Favorites.
| Concolor44 chapter 7 . 1/1/2014
1 - - I really like "Take Charge" Beast Boy. He's a great guy.
2 - - The way Raven's cloak changes color to reflect her emotional state now is WAY cool.
3 - - That BB could turn into any HUMAN has always seemed obvious to me, as is the FACT that his ability MUST incorporate magic in some degree. His explanation was spot on.
4 - - Tomorrow is going to be rough ... on both of them.
| Concolor44 chapter 4 . 12/31/2013
Heh. No real restrictions? Are you sure that was a good idea, Rae? You may be in for quite a little roller coaster ride.
| Concolor44 chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
You should ALWAYS write it the way you want to. If you write for someone else (or worse, the Audience) it will never be entirely true.
This is great. Everything you went over in the set-up made sense. It gladdens my heart when the characters act in a logical manner, and having then help each other with similar tasks is just about perfect.
On to Chapter 2!
| VividReederSeeder chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
| RockPikachu chapter 1 . 12/23/2013
| Guest chapter 6 . 10/14/2013
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| SimplyaCritic chapter 15 . 8/21/2013
i think who raven will with last
| SimplyaCritic chapter 5 . 8/21/2013
ok this is confusing me a bit but good job
| SimplyaCritic chapter 2 . 8/21/2013
| iamking chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
thank you for having hotspot and wildebeast as the temps.i dont know if they will be in this story that much,but you get points just for choosing them.i look forward to chapter 2(which i'm about to read.
some of this review(or later ones)is deleted i apologise,my ipod is an idiot.
| detrametal chapter 27 . 7/16/2013
a very interesting story with a brilliant take on things, I enjoyed reading you're story and wish you all the best with your future endevors
| Boulder-West chapter 19 . 6/28/2013
| ThoughtsLightAndFireAndSound chapter 27 . 6/22/2013
haha it was cool to see your thought process like that. though i did skim a bit since i've read a lot in the past 24 hours. his fic and some now other stuff haha
anywayz, lovely story
i love how you thoroughly explored raven's emotions with an original idea! i do feel that bb could have had more time with cullen, since i felt his part was significantly shorter
other than that i really enjoyed this story
fantastic characterization! your portrayals of bb and rae were wonderful. i felt that bb was really sweet and you also gave him more depth and maturity that was cool to see in him! raven was also written in character while realistically exploring the other facets of her personality i reckon
i did imagine them older though, but that may just be me :D
also loved the interactions between bb and rae it was cool to see how their relationship developed
i did feel the second half felt slower, but regardless, this was a lovely read!
fantastic story, thank you