|Reviews for Tamed|
| Aarontica chapter 7 . 8/11/2005
This story is getting better and better! Although I would have had Beast boy just come out and say 'I love you Raven, thats why I try to make you laugh and smile all the time!' Saturday is the day Beast boy turns into the 'Beast', huh?
| dr.evil99 chapter 7 . 8/11/2005
Teriffic, simply teriffic. The premise that you've used here is simple, and yet makes perfect sense. It's allowed you to illustrate the similarities that Beastboy and Raven share, while also exhibiting their diffrences. As you said, you've deviated from cannon somewhat, but everything youve done makes sense. It's not inconcieveable that BB could change into humanoids... I can recall at least one instance in the comic when he shifted into a Gordanian.
And I'll come out and say it, I'm a flag-waving BB/Rae shipper. Which is why the end of ch7 was such a angsty read for me. I do like that there is going to be some emotional hardship for the two of them, but I do sincerely hope that you get these two togeather. What can I say? I'm an incureable romantic.
I recently started writing my own fiction recently, and I mus say, since i've started, I find myself actually being more critical of what I read. And yet I can't really find anything to fault here, so far. Your grammar and spelling teriffic (and I can't tell you how refreshing that is!) and you obviously pay attention to detail. Great work so far, and I eagarly await ch8.
| Overactive Mind chapter 7 . 8/11/2005
Deep stuff...Fascinating twist with BB's powers. Makes sense given his power is essentially reformating his DNA. Logically, he should be able to tweak it within species as well as between them. Superb chapter in general, I must say. This is turning out so well, I've added it to my Favorite Stories list. For that, you get a free virtupie (guaranteed magic-free, your choice of flavor.) Congrats and update soon!
P.S. How do I get tickets to The Island Show with Raven Roth?
| Star's-Fire chapter 7 . 8/11/2005
You are a genius. Only an author with huge amounts of intelligence could make a story like this! So many twists and turns, but also so many mind racking things that make you stop and thinkover things. Wow, this a great story. It's easily one of my favorite ones. I can't wait for more, and yeah, Saturday did come as a surprise to me! But I don't know what to make of the slight argument they had about dating. Who's right? Who's wrong? Probably neither. Oh well, we can only hope that they'll figure it out sooner or later. xD I'm really looking forward to more! Keep up the great work!
| forsakentruth chapter 7 . 8/10/2005
Whoa. This is amazing.
(entering normal, spazzy mode)
Okay, but doesn't Raven like Beast Boy, or have SOME form of affection for him? Because when they were in her head, that emotion that I can't remember the name of definitely said something that implied the liking of Beast Boy. Or maybe I'm just being a bit too insane and reading way too much into this. Either way - UGH! WHY IS SHE SO AVOIDANCE-GIRL!
Well, I understand the character developmental reason WHY she's avoiding the date, but my less rational mind is ALOT more determined to ignore all reasonable explinations.
Brilliant story by the way, and surprisingly original.
| lol61188 chapter 7 . 8/10/2005
o no! I wasn't expecting that! Raven must like him or she wouldn't have asked him the question! But she does have a hard time expressing her emotions i guess...grr...thats why she came 2 the island...gr! haha :) update soon!
| SYStem-0 chapter 7 . 8/10/2005
very well written, nice twist... i think
| 6StringSamurai13 chapter 7 . 8/10/2005
Wow, two chapters in the same day, impressive! This was an awesome chapter btw. After the last few chapters focusing mainly on Raven, it was good to see things swing back the other way and focus on BB. That whole scene at the end where BB was trying to be anybody she wanted was just...wow. It was really intense. I was worried this wasn't going to be a bb/raven fic when I started reading those first few lines about their relationship. The argument between BB and Raven was well written too. It was just like...so true to their personalities. I liked their arguments...and especially BB's about his reasonings for not giving up and pushing to get to know her better. That was a VERY beast boy answer. Keep up the great work on the fic, I can't wait till the next chapter!
| Regrem Erutaerc chapter 7 . 8/10/2005
Not bad, but I believe Raven would of been more shocked/surprised for a moment right when he asked her to date him.
| Korey chapter 6 . 8/10/2005
This is one of the most fastidious stories I've ever read. I love the way you write out every single detail so meticulously I feel that I've just gotten 20 IQs smarter. Your story is easy to follow, and I don't mean middle school three letter words easy. You know exactly how much detail to put it, and the story line is spectacular. Very impressive, not what I would expect from fanfiction righters. You should be out there writing novels. Congratulations:)
| lol61188 chapter 6 . 8/10/2005
yey! Thanx for updatin!
| TheDenied chapter 6 . 8/10/2005
I had always wondered why Raven's clothes were blue...
A very interesting story. Keep it up!
| Regrem Erutaerc chapter 6 . 8/10/2005
Nicely done, but in that order of emotions to fuse, you had forgotten Timid. You didn't mention when she was to fuse with grey. Other than that, really good. And that was a great way to explain about her cloak. Very impressive theory indeed. I'm impressed. Great job.
Speaking of schizophrenia, I have 3 fanfic authors as partners for fic ideas I've had, though they've done most of the work and deserve most of the praise, and one of them just happens to be called "Schizophrenia". All of them are BB/Rae, and I'm sure you'd like them. I'd probably recommend you read them in this order, saving the best for last: "Schizophrenia" by Animeluv09, "Seven Years' Bad Luck in One Day" by Demigod, and "Quality Time" by BlueTitan. I hope you like them._ As much as I like this fic of yours.;)
| pimpofthetitans chapter 6 . 8/10/2005
i just love your story and the lenth of your storys are verry intence just the way i like them thank you for that. keep it up and remember she hast to stay at least 230 feet in the air when the beast comes out caz when the beast first jumped he took 12 stories and each story is 15 feet to 19 feet so well she should be well enough in the air so that he cant touch her and bring her down. or just have the beast be in love with her eather way works.
| pureangel86 chapter 5 . 8/9/2005
Do both, do both, do both please?