Reviews for Ribbons of Red
AtlantisGirl12 chapter 1 . 4/14/2008
Aww. Poor Warren! He is the best character of Sky High (in my opinion), and I think you did a great job giving him depth.
Z-L.B chapter 1 . 2/9/2008
how sad! Poor Warren. I'll say this what any of us would do for Wills home life! My father was a jerk too but I don't know what I'd do if I found myself being judged for his choices in life. I'd probably either become a hermit or go of a rampage! ZLB
fidelis5588 chapter 1 . 4/20/2007
I love!

Poor Warren. You're not the devil, and it's not you. None of it is you. You're beautiful and you're perfect and you're not, -never- going to be your father.

I think that's why I like Warren so much. He's misunderstood. He's all alone, and he's dark and he's sad, and he's the character I can relate to, at times.

This story was great. Don't underestimate it. )
wild wolf free17 chapter 2 . 8/17/2006
Oh, I love this.
Conic Disconnect chapter 1 . 9/15/2005
Awesome. Yes, you totally can submit this little beauty. Sorry it took so long to reply, I had to get a new computer. Again, this was cool. Im now going to do a dance. *Dances*
newtypeshadow chapter 1 . 9/5/2005
this is haunting. there are so many beautiful lines in here, too-i had to stop and reread things because they flowed so nicely or were said so eloquently. i'm wondering if layla knows exactly what the ambulance was for, and if anyone has noticed the scars that warren was hiding in the first fic. but back to this fic-i loved it. _
redrose19 chapter 1 . 8/24/2005
hey, i just read your story and i thought it was really great. i usually dont review but i thought that this was an awesome story and i just wanted to say so.

-rosie
PhoenixSong4232 chapter 1 . 8/23/2005
oh my god thats so depressing! Poor Warren! I'm sorry i'm reviewing pratically all your stories...oh well. Great job!
TheDreamerLady chapter 1 . 8/12/2005
wow...

just like, holy fucking hell...

I mean, dude... that was awesome... It was kinda trippy, and needed more details, but it was a well written plot...

dude... whoa...

I feel the sudden urge to write a story like this...

amanda and Lanco(the duck)
Victoria Wolf chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
So how fixed Warren up? Layla? Himself? who?

It'd be cool if his dad somehow got away/escaped from jail so that he oculd be Warren's father... give up the villian business cause Warren needs a father and he feels bad... something like that... I like wArren... but I SUCK at writing and love reading... okay just somethoughts...

I really liked this song! and I love your work... not the stupid stuff though... but that's not my speed
CinaBina chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
Wow. Its so...sad. Poor Warren. Do people really do this to each other? Its was really really really good. Please continue.
love shell chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
It's tortured and beautiful and disturbed and true all at once! I love how he's protrayed on this site. It gives you stuff to think about. How he's not just a flat character with only one goal and no life. He's a dynamic one made of different pieces and changes and feelings. Yes, great story!
stargazingirl chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
Aboslutely wonderful, I love it! And don't worry about the indenting thing too much, I think they need to redo how stories can be uploaded once again. The police was a nice touch, we forget the normal world in supernatural storylines.

And it definitely seemed like Warren would've been "forgotten" in the praise for the school's heroes. Poor Warren. I think that's why we like him so much. Plus he's cute. :)

Please put up the sequel soon!
silver-midnite chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
wah! pretty! sort of dark but still pretty...probably better than anything i could churn out ;; i really love warren's character because you can do pretty much anything with it including suicide and angst

will you do a sequal to 'sorry'? please? i think it would be awesome!

lov ya lots
Succumb chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
Wow, that was dark. Very dark. Man, I love dark fics. -sigh- I really want to just tackle Warren and be like, "I'll be your friend! I'd love to be your leech of a friend!". Somehow, I doubt the action would be very much appreciated.

I'm just thinking about this fic, trying to decide if it was too dark or out of character or anything like that. I definitely could see the struggle Warren has to be like his father or not and how hard it must be for him in Sky High where everybody seems to have everything - everyone but him. But as for actual suicide? Hmm... I need to think if I think that he'd actually try that.

Very well written story though. I usually hate the first person and shy away from it, but this one was intricate, with very lovely language. Good job.
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