Reviews for In This World For You |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Just started to read this amazing story again, i hope to read the end someday |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is quite wonderful. Hopefully you’ll find time to continue it one-day.. |
![]() ![]() would you ever consider posting this on AO3? I suddenly had the urge to read it again and the ffnet format is killing me |
![]() ![]() I Hope this message find you. you started writing this before I was even born and in a language that is not my native (I'm from Poland), but I would give a lot to see how this book ends. i really love this story are you sure you're not going to continue it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it so far and seriously hope you will start updating it again someday soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() A wonderful story! I do hope you'll continue it some day! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! It's my first time reading your story and I'm so glad I started it even with your big time gap! Thank you for writing! This has been an absolute pleasure. I LOVE your version of Harry, Severus, Draco as a brother, and the Malfoy as loving parents to Harry. I'm excited for whether you do your next update. What a fascinating place to pause on! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I Hope this message find you Very well, i Just read this history and i complete in love...i Hope you can write e finish this history someday Xoxo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my word every time I read this story, I fall in love with it all over again. I read it once a year and absolutely loved this chapter. I was so excited to see a new chapter after all these years. Please keep updating! I totally absolutely cannot wait to see where the rest of the story goes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so GOOD! I am so looking forward to all the time travel discussion, and of course the story of the seven Harrys! Remembering how frightened 1st year Draco seems of werewolves, saving him from that fate seems like a truly helpful thing. I have to believe his parents would still love and fight for him, but to be attacked by a werewolf in the Ministry would virtually ensure that knowledge would become public record, and that would have serious implications for Draco’s future. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is amazing and I can't believe I've not read it until now. I really hope you are able to continue it someday. Thanks for sharing what you have so far! Even without being finished it's very much worth the read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I love an overpowered Harry who feels barely in control of his own power. These new powers plus an apparent touch of metamorphmagus abilities is very exciting! Can’t wait to see how these develop, and honestly I’m hoping he has more than a little Phoenix in him, too. What with the funeral pyre foreshadowed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love what you’re doing with the material. The changes you’ve made are relatively comprehensive, but so far much of it could have fit within canon, and just been unspoken. Everyone loves their secrets in the Potterverse. What’s a few more? I was thinking about their intimacy while I was first reading it, and I think you handled it well. I love the playful tone and the banter between them. I liked that we figure out that Harry didn’t realize he had time traveled even as Severus made the same realization. And Severus, while resilient, has never been held up as a paragon of virtue. In true Slytherin fashion, Severus rationalized that it should be okay for them to be together with this moment as his first time with his soul mate, only to further realize that it was Future Harry’s first time, too. (Which was what he had decided he ultimately wanted for them). But I suspect we shouldn’t discount the impact of their first psychic bonding on Severus’ resistance. After being so mentally intimate so recently, physical intimacy must have felt like a much smaller step than it might have otherwiseand Severus might have been less able to resist the temptation a half-nude Harry squirming in his lap represented. After all that, I thought they were sweet togethernot frantic or rough as might have happened with so much sexual tension built between them. In fact, I now look forward to all the times Severus deflects Present Harry’s future advances, because this did not feel like the first time Future Harry had tried something like thismerely the first time he was so wildly successful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update soon! X |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello, I so love your story. I first read it when I was studying medicin years ago. Now I am pregenant with my third child and stubmbled on it once more and saw that you added a new chapter. Please do continue. I know you have abandond it once again for a couple of years, I do hope you are doing good and just had to much fun things to do. I love this story, you write very well and it is an orignal plot that hasnt been done numerus times before and I would really love to read how Harry is starting his time travelling! PLEASE if at all possible try to end this story I am sure it would make a lot of readers VERY happy! Love Awen |