Reviews for Kim's Weird Day
Guest chapter 1 . 9/2/2016
How would team go react
DavidC20OfficialWriter chapter 1 . 12/9/2015
well, what a strange story but considering that it's in April Fools, EVERYBODY IS GOING TO HAVE A PROBLEM WITH KIM!
Well, i enjoyed your story, i hope to see more in the future!
Macke chapter 2 . 9/12/2013
Why you little...!
Haha! Homer Simpson
Guest chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
Hysterical Insanity chapter 1 . 11/11/2011
*mouth agape and laughing slightly* the heck did I just...*falls off chair in hysterical laughing* Brilliant. Simply brilliant. Reminds me of a weird dream I had once where Shego and Kim were sisters and then Shego roke through the wall into my math class because someone in my grade stole something from her to give it to her crazy cousin Dementor...yeah, I have no clue either.

Ruby of Raven chapter 2 . 10/4/2010
Loved it!
The Wise Duck chapter 2 . 1/7/2007
That was beyond strange, beyond weird. If that was thinking outside of the box, that was all the way beyond the state line, two borders over.

The writing was good once you stopped the editorial comments (I know this was commented on before but I just wanted to reinforce it). I applaud that you were able to keep all of that straight because I got lost after about half the first chapter.

The revenge was nice. I would like to have seen on what would eventually happen to the ‘rents thou.

Nice little piece of work.

The Wise Duck
Jonathan Webster chapter 1 . 11/2/2006
This story is the funniest fanfic I have read. I absolutley loved it. You get 100/100 for outstanding story line and being completely hilarious!
CastaS chapter 2 . 9/28/2006
great story, i enjoyed it much, excellent
RI100014 chapter 2 . 9/25/2006
OK that was too harsh, if she was gonna dump him (in this really weird one shot) you should have made her more out of character and done a Bonnie type public humiliation dumping. Because that was just rude! Ron's my favorite character right beside KP, with Shego not far behind. Doing that to him was mean...

Till next time...adios.
RI100014 chapter 1 . 9/25/2006
I am so happy this is a bad joke because there is so many impossibilities in this. First of all being that Drakken has to be in his mid to late 40's. So his mother would have to be in her mid to late 60's and since Kim's only 17, she'd have had her at the very late age of 50 which given menapause would be almost impossible. Also Drakken being Shego's father would not work with the story shown in Team Go. This thing is soo sick and wrong, but a good attempt at a confusing one-shot. Ill give you that...

till next time...adios.
Albino Magpie chapter 1 . 6/28/2006
Awesomely the family connections gave me a bit of a 're more weird then mine:

The father of my mother's brother is the brother of my father's motherMy father's uncle is my uncle's father.

More precisely:My grandma had a child with her first husband, H.D..

This child is my grandmother broke up with H.D., and when my mother was ten, she married her second husband, R.E..

They had a son, G.E., who's my ,R.E. was the sister of I.S., who was the mother of M.S..When my mother was twenty-nine, she had a child with said M. .So that makes me my fathers grand-cousin, and my uncles as you did understand that-it's a bit complicated.
Aero Tendo chapter 2 . 10/26/2005
Funny! Both chapters were very, very funny!

Kim's revenge was very good too!

They all got what was coming to them for the silly April fool's joke though I think she should have pranked her parents.
G-Go chapter 2 . 9/25/2005
Nice epilogue. The writing and humor are good. Reading this chapter was much more enjoyable than the last due mainly to the fact that you did away with the paranthetical commentary. It just flows better.

Good story, I like it.
G-Go chapter 1 . 9/25/2005

This is quite the amusing story. I liked the running gag with people sounding like they're reacting but actually talkign to someone else (Ron talking to Rufus, Wade talking to his dog).

Seems like a bit of a harsh joke to play, but messing with people's heads can be fun.

The writing is good; one or two spelling mistakes and grammatical errors.

The one problem I have is with all your commentary throughout the story (where you explain things in parentheses). This really detracts from the story itself. It's kind of like watching a DVD with the Director's commentary on, but wishing it wasn't on so you could just enjoy the movie. For me, all that stuff really kind of takes away from the enjoyment of the story itself.

Other than that, I think it's a pretty nifty story, and I'm off to read chapter two.
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