Reviews for Night on the Town
shadowphantomness chapter 1 . 3/30/2012
Oh, I love stories with Gai and Lee, I really do, and the fact that he hit on Shino is priceless.

"It's the beauty of youth! It blinds so many things. Have we met before?"

And then... "the cousin of our own illustrious Byakuganuser, Stick-in-Mud-Neji!" Those two lines cracked me up.

Of course, the HinaNeji at the end was the cherry on the sundae~
ShyShinobi chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
Haha! I couldn't stop laughing when I read this!. . . Poor Shino.

Good job! You're a really good writer!_ Keep up the good work! D
Hesunohana chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
so funny !
Haruka2007 chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
absolutely hilarious
aibabexo chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
lol hilarious... i love this story.
HeartBrokenHinata chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
hahah shino is soo funny I love the last line
oreostar90 chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
Lol. Poor Shino, I think him saying it was more of a nightmare would have been better, but thats the sick love triangle loving side of me. : )

Had me laughing the whole time, thank you!
NejiHina SasuNaru Lover chapter 1 . 7/16/2007
awesome job plz plz plz uploade
Sagishi chapter 1 . 6/20/2007
XD Haha XD Poor Lee...and Shino. I loved that last line, it made me crack up. Nice job!
Imaginary Self chapter 1 . 5/1/2007
Thats hilarious... yay for Shino. I'm faving this! XD
Isane chapter 1 . 2/9/2007
Hahahahahaha the first time I read this was at Eightbirds. This is clearly one of my favorite Hyuuga fan fics! Can't you write a sequal? (would be soo sweet)

btw. I'm also waiting for an update on "Power Games" - loved that as well!

Keep up the good work!

(I'll be checking eightbirds as well as adultfanfic and this site) ;)

Story Weaver1 chapter 1 . 2/8/2006
Hinata and neji is kinda distrubing. But Drunk Gai mistaking Shino for a girl is funny
LocoTenshi chapter 1 . 1/24/2006
Kyahahahah! Does this mean that Shino likes Hinata to! I luv this story!
Olga-Bonhilda Maria-Belle chapter 1 . 12/25/2005
hahaha! I luffed it, I cracke dup when Gai thought Shino was a girl! _
junebiyatch chapter 1 . 11/21/2005

funny...real funny...poor shino-kun...

and well...Gai's kinda funny too...drunk or not...hehehehe
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