Reviews for Little Brother
WayLowHalo chapter 1 . 10/28/2008
Aw, I liked this! Poor Joyce, and it was a good picture of Spike.
Rebel Goddess chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
Other than the fact that you made the reason for Joyce liking Spike tangibly sad, the other thing I really liked was the repeated line about the chest and edges. Gorgeous but kind of tragic for all concerned too.
Laccramos chapter 1 . 12/25/2005
Not one to really enjoy poetry but that was really well written.
CiceroGuided chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
wow. a neat explaination 4 it. im a teeny bit confused, did her lil bro commit suicide? is that what u were auluding 2?
The Phantom chapter 1 . 8/11/2005
This was incredibly good. Fantastic poetry. I want to pick a favorite part, but I can't! It's all so amazing! I liked the bit about the two different faces. And the edges being sharp. I can't just choose! My favorite part was: the whole thing.

~ Phantom
ozma914 chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
That certainly would explain a lot; and that relationship has always interested me, too. Your writing style is very interesting, half story and half poem - while I'm a traditionalist, you've made this work wonderfully.
CriesofCapricorn chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
Incredibly sweet! Nice work.
deletedprofile2 chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
Mhmm, I agree. Good work _