|Reviews for Pegasus|
| Monki-Neko chapter 7 . 2/3/2015
i wonder if mckay will ever learn of the connection bw the two of them?
| Sparky She-Demon chapter 18 . 10/11/2012
This story was amazing! I loved it!
| ss2gohan chapter 18 . 7/24/2012
Just read through this story again for the first time in a few years. I enjoyed it now just as much as I did the first time. Great work on the characters and the plot, and an interesting/different use of the Mark of Cain. Loved the ending.
Any other stories in the works for Van Helsing?
| Asilem Dlanod chapter 18 . 10/25/2011
Hmm, the ending was a bit abrupt, but I liked it. I honestly don't know all that much about the Van Helsing mythos, beyond what very little I recall from the movie, which I haven't seen in several years. Even so, it was relatively easy to follow, and I enjoyed how you weaved the two worlds together rather seamlessly.
| AzazelLuciferDeathCrowley chapter 18 . 9/10/2011
is there going to be a sequel if there is let me know pleaz
| Deadzepplin chapter 18 . 8/31/2011
| SpaceHead3 chapter 18 . 12/21/2010
That was seriously one of the best stories I've read on this site. Good job.
| alokin chapter 18 . 8/18/2010
The Mark is actually the Ancient gene ?
Isnt the Mark supposed to be some kind of punishment or "taint" ?
Seems they only got benefits from it ...
And how did Cains descendants end up to be the Ancients ?
The ending is not ambiguous as you intended it to be ...
ITS PLOT-HOLED .
Beside the irritating end , the crossover was good and engaging . Loved reading it .
| alokin chapter 2 . 8/18/2010
Dont know squat about Van Helsing except that one movie ... (which I think doesnt have lot to do with your story )
Still , looks like a cool crossover .
| psycholady141 chapter 18 . 7/2/2010
WOW! i love this story, the plot is great and there is a lot of mystery...i really hope you write a sequel to this story!
| NamedForTheWind chapter 8 . 5/31/2010
Very good so far, but one thing; the whole "go to hell" thing is very Protestant, and Van Helsing is portrayed as primarily Catholic. A Catholic archangel would be more likely to say something about judgement or the Lord's wrath...
| Obi1Nemogbr chapter 18 . 10/4/2009
Great story and you made Gabriel come to life.
I do wonder what would happen when religion gets into sci-fi at times.
In any case, lots of apocryphal writings never made it into the mainstream. I am reminded of the nephilium episode in the X-files.
| the music lady chapter 18 . 6/8/2009
i keep getting rec'd back to this fic, and every time i read it, i try to fave it again.
this whole story makes me happy on the inside.
| Andromeda chapter 18 . 5/31/2009
this is such a good story! please please please please write a sequel!
| tremerid chapter 18 . 5/7/2009
I've read through this story a few times over the years, though I never did read it in its finished state. Now that I have, I'm nearly speechless. I loved the characters, especially Gabriel and how you portrayed him. I really hope that there will be a sequel to this story sometime in the future, because I honestly would love to read it. I will admit though that the ending you used was well placed and couldn't be done better by any movie out there. It was a perfect fade to black with enough of an open-ended lilt to leave room for a possible sequel.
Keep up the great work, and post a sequel when and if you can!