Reviews for More than That She Doesn't Want
gabelou1991 chapter 1 . 1/8
J'aime bien.
The Phantom chapter 1 . 8/19/2005
Repetition in a poem is a tricky thing; it can get real pretentious real fast. I kept an eye out, but no pretentiousness here! Just more amazing poetry. You make the repetition work so well, just Spike running in circles in his head, trying to reason with himself. And this:

Sometimes she forgets and lets me

Hold her to my dark, dead heart

That was just gorgeous.

~ Phantom
ozma914 chapter 1 . 8/13/2005
And again: poetry. I can imagine Spike, at certain moments, writing this himself.
CriesofCapricorn chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
Marvelous, again!