|Reviews for Half Asleep|
| The Revisor chapter 1 . 2/2
Ugh, I adore your writing
| RosieGurrl chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
A heart-wrenching masterpiece.
| C chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
The thing is that your one shots are so good...I have read a couple of them and you leave the ending open in many of them and that i a bad thing for the readers who liked it so much...So for advice maybe you should put some clousure in your oneshots if you are not planing on writing it as a full story...
But like i said it's really good and you are one of my favorite writers in this place
| BiccaBoo chapter 1 . 9/3/2006
That was brilliant. I loved the detail and how you described how Will felt so well.
| char chapter 1 . 6/8/2006
that was pretty good
| Victoria Lilly chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
I HAD to check out this one since you told me to in 'i'm awake'!...and i'm so glad i did! I SO loved the personification with the nightmares at the beginning! it was beautifully written! you have such a talent for describing things and making the reader feel like they are THERE and can ACTUALLY picture it! you did such a good job! i know you said that this was just to remain a ONEshot but i'b love to see MORE will/caleb oneshots from you! you really have a talent and i wanna see more! keep up the great work! ~VL
| jujubee123 chapter 1 . 2/21/2006
You can write! that was good it made me cry!
| LadyLibra12 chapter 1 . 2/18/2006
... i..loved..it... it was full of detail, its like you were Will. you are a great writer. PLEASE write more stories like this!
| Striped Leopard 626 chapter 1 . 2/18/2006
You are an awesome writer! Kepp up the good writings!
| MaGiCsLiFe chapter 1 . 2/1/2006
| EnV chapter 1 . 10/10/2005
well if u wont continue this will u continue the other one.. I'm awake?
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
that was really deep
| Kateb chapter 1 . 9/27/2005
COOL! I LOVE WILLXCALEB Stories they are awsome!
forget cornelia! This is so coufusing to me though! ok that might be becuse i am a blonde but... Wait i have brown hair! does that make me a brown? well any way does Cornelia have thoughts in this to? Does Will onely talk or does Caleb Talk to? Please let me know!
| alik chapter 1 . 9/6/2005
i really like your story. you should add more to it.
| orinocono chapter 1 . 8/23/2005
of course, fantastic, really just beautiful. as always, EMAIL me though, we need to talk.