|Reviews for Worlds of Grey|
| ShadowDown chapter 1 . 8/17/2005
not to good? are you kidding? this is awsome! its really touching, and the writing's beautiful
| lazy fat kitsune chapter 1 . 8/11/2005
cool! another nice one. i like it though i don't really fancy the pairing.
sidenote: will finish the fic asap. need the initiative to type it in the comp.;;
| Lucinda the Maid chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
Lovely! I don't really read shounen-ai, but this one was very nice. Though it was angsty, contrary to Aaya's typical personality (Ayame-angst is difficult to write!), he was still kept in character through flawless writing and wonderful images. I especially liked this line: "He leaves and I freeze (and everyone knows how much I hate the cold!)." Very true to his character. _
This fic could be extended a teeny bit; the ending was a little unsatisfying, as I'd love to read more. But, standing alone as a one-shot, this was alright. This was really good. Nice job!
| simplewin chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
First comment! *preens*
Call me a sap, but that last sentence was just so *sniffles* beautiful *blows nose*
Wonderful Ayame fic...Yet another one to your name ;)
When are you making one featuring a Hatori/Shigure? Aw, c'mon! you know you want to! *wink* *nudge*