|Reviews for Through Broken Eyes|
| annahellsing chapter 36 . 6/17/2012
hello I loved your story very much and found some points of it very funny especially concerning christine as I am not greatly fond of the little bitch :) but I would like to say that I do hope you continue this at least to the wedding and the baby coming, then you may end it. if not I may have to crack a bitch (christine) but anyway please continue!
| lara06 chapter 36 . 12/17/2011
hey you! :)
Im german, so from the german ff page,theres your story in german.
And i thought, it would be good, if i review your english story too!
Its your work, your mind, so i just wanted to say:
i really enjoyed reading your story!
And kristen and Erik are so incredible sweet together!
really, really grat!
Your idea ith Nadir and Meg was georgious! :)
i really, really, really love your story! :)
if my english was bad, please ... forgive me... xD
how i said, im german... ;)
yours, Lara 3
| Silence Navarathna chapter 36 . 12/6/2011
wonderful, absolutely wonderful. it's so refreshing to read a story not focused on Christine. thank you for the great read
| RedDeathLvr chapter 11 . 4/16/2011
*sigh* I don't know if you still frequent , and I know that you've written this fic around 5 or 6 yrs ago, but I just want to let you know that I really love this story line. I'm not even sure if you've finished it, but if you haven't, I hope you will. I'm only on chapter 11 right now, and it is brilliant.
Thank you for sharing your talent with the rest of us.
| Annie Lockwood chapter 4 . 6/29/2010
Very good story. I am quite intrigued.
| LovexXxHate chapter 36 . 1/18/2008
This story is amazingg! you write beautifully, i cant wait untill the next chapter. Its Phantastic!
| Hot4Gerry chapter 36 . 9/14/2007
So, is there more to the story? I think we need a bit more but then I'm greedy. Please give us more. I started this a while back then lost it somehow. I found it again today and reread the beginning and now I have come to the end of this chapter.
| IthilielCuivienien chapter 36 . 11/17/2006
This is so brilliant! I just love it! Please write more! *beg*
| Phantom Shadow of the Titanic chapter 36 . 8/23/2006
Oh dood you've got to continue this one! It's just too good! You should really put a warning on about it's being addictive though. LOL I've read the whole thing in two days!
I love Kristen. She's so charmingly kwerky and slightly demented. She's a perfect match for Erik! You've succeeded in keeping Erik in character too. Too often, in highly fluffy stories, his pain and darker side get lost. But you've managed to retain them, even while showing his becoming somewhat happier now that he is really loved. I love the way Kristen is actually atracted to his darker side as well, not just his sunny side. That's different, and it makes her character more interesting. The other great thing about this story is the commic timing of Meg, Madame Giry and even Christine, as they walk into scenes at the most inopportune moments possible. I'm glad, by the way, that Meg finally found her own happiness. Having her end up with Nadir was quite a twist! I like it though. I must say however that you've made Madame Giry rather unsympathetic. She's always so willing to think the worst of Erik and of Nadir, and yet one would think that she would know better having been the one who rescued Erik from the fair in the first place, if you're going by the movie that is. If you're going by the stage version though, then I can see how you get her view of Erik. She didn't rescue him in that version and doesn't really know the man, only the Phantom. I'm surprised that, among her reasons for not approving of Meg's choice, she didn't have an issue with the fact that Nadir would not be a good Christian but a Muslim. Interfaith and inter-racial marriages were rare if not unheard of in the 19th century. Heck, even a marriage between a Catholic and a Protestant would have been frowned upon!
Christine really hasn't grown up, has she? You've made her somewhat unsympathetic too. She's so emotionally fragile, a bit of a wuss if I may say so. Her constantly being on the point of falling apart tries my patience, although it does work in terms of the plot.
Anyway, great work! Keep it up, and please do update again soon although I'll be sad to see this story end. So I hope you will write a sequel!
| Live2Create chapter 36 . 8/22/2006
Wow, I've been so busy with moving that I haven't had time to check this story's progress...but oh how great it was to read four chapters straight. I didn't think Meg had it in her to leave. I was proud of her. And Kristen and Erik...*sigh* so happy for them even though they have to deal with a dazed and irritating Christine. I, like Kristen, would have had a hard time keep a straight face and not laughing at Daae. Anyway great chapters, and I can't wait to read the following chapters as well as the conclusion to the story...as sad as I'll be to see it end...all stories must end sometime...
| ApollosLyre chapter 36 . 8/19/2006
Oh My God! I hadn't checked this story in a long time and I felt compelled the other day to come by over here and I find like 5 new chapters up! I nearly fell out of my chair! I missed this story SO much! I'm SO happy there's more to read! I'm LOVING Meg running away with Nadir! I also love the tension between Christine, Erik and Kristin. Damn I really did miss this story! Don't leave me hanging with nothing to read for another 8 months okay?
| RedHairedElfling chapter 36 . 7/30/2006
Wow. Words cannot describe the absolute beauty of this story. I'm so glad you had Raoul killed, he always bothered me. Sorry about that bit of randomness, but I needed to congradulate you on your timley killing of said count. Yes, I just read the whole story. It took a long time, but I finished! Haha! You should get this published. It rocks!
| SilverGlassRose chapter 36 . 7/18/2006
yay! your writing again! the story is lovly, cant wait to see what happens next!
| epokalyptikal chapter 36 . 7/14/2006
hello my darling babybunkerboo.
lol XD im so corny.
sorry it took me forever to review, i was out of town!
lovely chapter, as always, glad you are still writing!
cant wait for more!
| Love-your-suit chapter 36 . 7/11/2006
i love this story. really just reviewing so you keep writing..