Reviews for Future Past
bloodshound chapter 1 . 4/18
cybertrons version of the Anzac parade. The originals are going, but their children and children's children still march...
Storylady35 chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
WOW! What a great story! Short but so good! Well done man, well done!
Crazygrrl XD chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
Nooo.. I cried so hard! Poor Jazz... It's beautiful, but so sad...
Keep Calm and Stay Heroic chapter 1 . 4/16/2011
omg, so didn't see that comming...So Jazz survived after all...
Kasuto Vero chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
Wow. That last line was my favourite part.

This is actually the only story that I have read that made me cry. I was describing it to my sister when I felt the tears start to fall. This is beautiful, simply beautiful.
WhisperedMemories chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
I LOVED THAT! It was so whimsical in the way that Jazz spoke to them. It sort of reminds me how my uncle used to talk about Vietanam.
Afrolady114 chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
Ahh, good ol' Jazz still blastin' his music at full power. TT_TT Geez this makes me wanna cry... TT_TT

:D great story! Love the ending! Mirage's and Starscream's descendants! YAYZ! _
Meirelle chapter 1 . 3/17/2009
This was such a good story, and the ending was so cute. It's nice to know Jazz still has fun in his old age.
Garjan Ingel chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
This fic is really touching. I'm glad to see a bright future for Cybertron where the labels "decepticon" and "autobot" no longer exist.

I love the details you used to describe Jazz, especially his manner of speaking. Everything captured his personality, or at least my view of it, perfectly. It was great how you didn't announce that Jazz was the old mech, you just used his personality and some descriptive text. The prank at the end was priceless and very Jazz. :D

I'm definitely checking out your other works now.

~Garjan Ingel
CMC chapter 1 . 12/12/2008
Interesting read.

I like the fact that you mentioned that even though many people are against war, sometimes it's inevitable.

This was both sad and sweet, and well written to boot ), awesome job.
Kittona chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
that was a sweet little story with a nice message. We should never forget what others have gone through to give us what we have.
Taipan Kiryu chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
This was beautiful to read.

And so sad too. You did an excellent job describing all those absences and empty spaces through Jazzs old visor. Glory to the fallen ones.

"Do you know who that was?" the flyer whispered, awe-struck by the realization, "He was Cybertron's greatest ever saboteur."

Amazing...

Thank you for this story.
Ghost of the Dawn chapter 1 . 1/24/2008
Wow, this one has to be my favorite so far of yours. Very poignant with it's message and it give me hope for the future of Cybertron and makes me appreciate those working for its future now.
tomorrow4eva chapter 1 . 11/19/2007
Great story. :) What a nice view of Cybertron's future.
Iniora Nackatori chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
Aw... Sweet! That was a nice little story. I truly enjoyed it!

Jazz rulz!
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