|Reviews for Raven's Game|
| ChristinaWolff11 chapter 17 . 19h ago
Haha oh I love the bloopers
| ChristinaWolff11 chapter 15 . 19h ago
Wow... That's... Creepy. But cool. I really like it not too gross to stop reading but interesting enough to keep me coming back. I don't mind the romance I'm actully for it. Really good.
| Zatara chapter 15 . 10/21/2013
Oh my gosh that was AMAZING! I'm going through all your TT fanfics right now and I must say I'm very impressed! The horror in this one was perfect, I like how each clue was creative. All of your stories are so off the beaten path (I'm not a reaXbb fan but your stories make that an exception) I loved Shade and was a little skeptical about this one but you blew it out of the water! You can really see the time you invested in this, the writing was great and I didn't get distracted with loads of repeated words and bad grammer, thanks for putting in such effort! And its finished! And the whole thing was so terrifying, I'm not sure how much was from the game but even if most of it was the finess you used to place it into Teen Titan mode and make it relivent and terrifying for both Raven and us was an incredible amount! And I use too many exclamation points too so don't worry about it! Anyway thank you so much for writing some really great stories and keep writing please (no matter what it is) yoir style is wonderful and you have a lot of tallent!
| CheeseJellyBean chapter 17 . 9/30/2013
bloopers were actually quite entertaining as well :)
| CheeseJellyBean chapter 16 . 9/30/2013
Mate, I got to say - that was really, really good!
I don't know how much of that you copied from the original game but it translated fantastically across into the titan universe. The plot was definitely the best I have ever come across on this site. It might have gotten a bit samey in the middle but the encounters Raven had were gripping!
The changing between the game world and the real world worked excellently as well. I thought they were flashbacks at the beginning and slowly began to realise the events in both worlds were taking place at the same time - really fantastically well done.
Writing was excellent, characters were kept in character and atmospheric scenes with Raven were well written.
Sure the romance part at the end happened very quickly, but I'm not complaining.
Like I said, even if you have taken most of the game and copied it plot turn for turn, it was still excellently transcribed.
| Splashfire chapter 1 . 7/7/2013
I've played DF: The Journal, and didn't sleep for a week. Naturally, I started having creepy hallucinations. I kinda past out, and slept for two days. I didn't play the game again.
Good chapter, by the way! Sorry you had to read my "life story".
| Sonoch chapter 4 . 6/16/2013
Holy X'Hal, that was creepy!
That's a good thing.
| BartWLewis chapter 17 . 4/30/2013
This story was AWESOME. The blooper reel was so funny :)
| Guest chapter 8 . 3/15/2013
I love the whole story and all but when it comes to Starfire you don't have to always put 'friend' in-front of another team-members name
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/28/2013
I think you're do'n great with it
| nhatminh chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
| SilentThief chapter 15 . 11/27/2012
... Wow. That was... FANTASTIC!
HOLY HELL! That was brilliant! That's by far one of the best Teen Titans fanfics i've ever read! I'd place that as my second favourite! I loved it, absolutely freaking loved it. Thankyou for sharing! :D
| afraid person chapter 17 . 8/5/2012
okay this is the most scare story i ever read but it's AWESOME i become afraid of the dark becuz of it but the blooper's make me go to dark and laugh i know i am crazy but isn't all of us like that :-P
| afraid person chapter 7 . 8/4/2012
okay i am reading this at 3:19AM and i am in my room alone and i am really scared i think i will sleep with my mother today :-P
| kaori and yoshi chapter 17 . 7/13/2012
i love this story sooooooo much that i am going to read the sequel and the sequel's sequel. happy face! - yay! (first chapter mentioned too many exclimation points. impossible! you can never have to many!) i am so excited! on to the sequel! even though its... 5:47 AM and i've been reading all night... hmmmmmmmmmmm... on to the sequel!