Reviews for The White Rose: Bedroom scene
reader chapter 1 . 4/12/2007
fool it did not suck. you do not need to go in to full detail about a sex scene. it was good. the ending needs more to it though. reread it and you will sewhat i mean.
RisenGrave chapter 1 . 3/20/2007
I noticed that this scene was missing. This sounds strange but the story makes more sense with this scene (Maybe strange was an understatement...) Theres been better buts theres sure as hell been worse

morelove chapter 1 . 3/17/2007
bellecatastrophe chapter 1 . 2/20/2007
That was... awesome!

dOrKy-GuRl03 chapter 1 . 1/2/2007
tsk..tsk..tsk..haha...well just hope that they have a fun passionte kissing making love..haha...well just going to leave..bye..bye...:D...
thisaccounthasbeenemptied chapter 1 . 12/24/2006
Great story. Write more when you can.
Teneche Hyuga chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
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ideletedmessagesbcihatehets chapter 1 . 10/15/2006
this isn't esme tyler logged on this is rachel from bosworth and i was just wondering will you put in another chapter because i read your white rose and i thought that was bloody brilliant and i was wondering if another chapter was going to be put onto this and i know that you didn't write this but i want to know if another chapter will be put into this?
meD chapter 1 . 9/10/2006
heyy! u should seriously consider making a rob/star spin off of The White Rose too! i like the rob/star couple soo much!(they're so cute!) i dont think its fair to them that they dont have their own moments(;

just a suggestion..but im sure many others would also like a rob/star spin off! thx! i would deeply appreciate it!:)
Sour Sizzle chapter 1 . 9/2/2006
It didn't suck, it was awesome
lesjeux chapter 1 . 7/25/2006
It's wasn't that bad. On the contrary, it was kind of sweet.
Meandering Muse chapter 1 . 4/26/2006
It was okay. Expecially if you haven't experienced sex before. However, i know it was a lemon, but more discription in their emotions should be given. Like... how did they FEEL duirng sex? What was Beastboy thinking? Raven? It would bring a whole new element to the peice.

Keep writing.

Write hard,

write long,

write until dawn,

msdarling chapter 1 . 1/24/2006
no its so good!
Loki14 chapter 1 . 1/13/2006
Didnt suck in the slightest, my friend...Its good to see its a lemon written with love and not lust...thought lust IS nice to use as well. .
GothicRavenxBB4ever chapter 1 . 12/26/2005
I loved it but it did lack a little bit of detail but still it was awesome. :)
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