Reviews for The New Intruder
THIS STORY IS BS chapter 2 . 7/5
THIS IS THE MOST FUCKED UP THING I HAVE EVER READ. BULLSHIT GO FUCKING KILL YOURSELF. -99999999/10
Guest chapter 9 . 3/21/2015
O.M.G that was amazing
pokeman blood chapter 1 . 3/29/2014
Dis is a pretty good story so far and in only on chap. 1 :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) B-)
Eevee girl chapter 9 . 11/26/2011
That was almost one of the best story's I ever read!
KingZthe1st chapter 9 . 11/29/2009
Classic happy ending man! That was beast yet u wrote it 4-3 yrs ago!
PokemonManaphy chapter 9 . 9/18/2009
How in the world did you make this plot? I love the story, it is one of the best advanceshipping stories in the world!
PokemonManaphy chapter 4 . 9/18/2009
You are the best author here, and I dont want to hurt any other author's feelings!
PokemonManaphy chapter 2 . 9/18/2009
I like this story! It is great!
annamis chapter 9 . 4/24/2009
it was grate i loved the ending i loved the hole story
The Head Honcho chapter 9 . 1/17/2009
great story
readeradv chapter 9 . 6/6/2008
Okay...

That ending was kinda lame...
Wolfofdoom chapter 9 . 7/23/2007
Woah! THAT WAS FUCKING AWESOME!
Wolfofdoom chapter 8 . 7/23/2007
Who has won this is like one of the nerve racking episodes you could probably take over writing for the show you are good enough.
Wolfofdoom chapter 7 . 7/23/2007
And so it begins will Ash Win. Will he get his freedom. Will he ever tell May he loves her.

This and more to come in the next chapter hopefully.
Wolfofdoom chapter 6 . 7/23/2007
Poor girl
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